[ficpost] "Downhill From Here" Jack/Daniel

[wisdomeagle]

Title: "Downhill From Here"
Fandom: Stargate: SG-1
Pairing: Jack/Daniel
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Marital infidelity
Spoilers/Timeline: After S8. Ish.
Notes: For prehistoric_sea in the Catchallathon.
Summary: But he makes hungry where most he satisfies -- Shakespeare, alt.
Wordcount: ~1000

Comments

[raedbard]

OH JACK AND DANIEL. Oh fucking hell, Ari. I <3 this so damn much. I have such a desperate little kink for as-they-got-older-and-changed-and-fell-apart-and-put-themselves-and-each-other-back-together-again fic. Happy sigh.

The first not-really-section, when they were young, is absolutely beautiful. Before Daniel cut his hair. Just ... *ded*. Too much hearts.

They want to fuck all night, Jack pinned against the wall and Daniel bearing down on him, reminding him that he's a person and a body, that he has mass and weight and nerve-endings. Daniel wants to fuck off-world into Jack, wants to kiss him with adventure and suck him off with Gate-travel.
Guh. GUH. I so totally want to gorge on SG-1 right now, for srs.

"You've never been mature, Jack."
"So I reached the point early. I'm precocious."
Smirk. Oh, Jack. :D

Wowwowwow. So much good. You are *so* good at this. <3

[wisdomeagle]

Thank you so much. I'm really glad that you liked it. SG-1 is heart, yeah?

<3<3<3

[wisdomeagle]

You're welcome! I am so glad it worked so well for you. <3

[wisdomeagle]

♥ Thank you!!

[justhuman]

*SQUEEES*

This is gorgeous. There's lots of ways to do Jack and Daniel but the best ways are what you've done here, just accepting them the way they are. They have sex with other people, Jack gets old, Daniel gets tough, Jack's memories of adventure fades and Daniel's too much a junkie for it and tries to make Jack remember.

The conversation about Jack's maturity and need for sarcasm is just spot on.

Well done :-D

[wisdomeagle]

Thank you so much. *g*

[melayneseahawk]

Oh, boys.

[wisdomeagle]

Indeed.

[melayneseahawk]

In my mind, their relationship went one of two ways: they never gave in, until they were both grounded and the program was public and they could fade away together, or they were fucking the whole time and fell apart and came back together. And you nailed it.