Fic: Room on the Third Floor (Pansy/Ron)

[wintervixen86]

TITLE: Room on the Third Floor
RATING: NC-17
SUMMARY: "Why not me? I see you. They don't. And they never will." - In the middle of the war, two enemies come together.
FANDOM: Harry Potter (Pansy/Ron)
STATUS: Complete - 8,077 words
DISCLAIMER: I do not own anything. This story is a work of fiction and came from the deepest, darkest, corner of my

Comments

[kalisgirl]

Oh, Pansy! She's just setting herself up for pain, or is she? I'd like to hope not, but you've made it wonderfully ambiguous. Would it be too much to hope for some of Ron's story, too? His damage is also fascinating.

I really enjoyed Pansy's journey through this story, the girl on the margins who can't help but be hurt by the war. Great job with the character and the images created - the colours and concepts in the room, the 'table' question.

Well done!

[wintervixen86]

Thanks so much for reading! :)

[tryslora]

Oh that ending... *aches*

[teenage_hustler]

Ooh. A very good fic indeed. I loved the intensity of it. :)

[nattish]

I enjoyed that very much. It was a pleasant and unusual look at two characters I could definitely see matching up in a weird way. And -- wow! -- what an ending. I'm glad you left it open ended, too -- keeps the suspense going while staying true to canon.

Also, you’re right. Things are simpler on the floor. And more honest.