[Star Trek XI, Jim Kirk, gen] The Falling Days

[wintersjuly]

In my usual panic!panic!freakout before writing my essay, I've mainlined about six cups of tea in about two hours and my hands are shaking and my pulse is speeding like I've jogged for five minutes so obviously in this impaired state of being, I figured hey, why not post that creative writing post-modern thing I wrote for class a while back?

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[tristesses]

This is just...wow. I sort of feel like I need a moment to process this. Wonderful job.

[wintersjuly]

thank you! i'm glad you liked it ♥

[roadwaffle]

This was different. I liked it.
The story kind of sucked me in and left me feeling... hollow is not the right word, but it's the best I can do to describe the feeling.
I feel the need for a hot cup of coffee now or a walk.
Wonderful work!

[wintersjuly]

thank you! it's really nice of you to say so :D

[somewhatcliche]

Wow. Gorgeous. I love things like this-the stories that you can interpret however you want, but at the same time, there's really only one thing it COULD be.

I think it was really powerful. I'm glad you shared :)

[wintersjuly]

aw, thank you! i'm so glad it worked for you ♥

[wintersjuly]

klajdklajd i'm not all that confidence writing serious things, so thank you karen love ♥

[blcwriter]

I love that you dared with this. Wonderful.

[wintersjuly]

thank you! a lot of this was fairly experimental for me, so that it works for you, is very gratifying to know. ♥