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Mar 06, 2010 23:18

2010 Winter Games Kink Meme
Part 2

I never really expected this to take off so well, let alone end up with 4000+ comments. Now it's time for part 2!
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1. We are all here to have a little fun. Am I right?
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sort-of-fill [8/8] anonymous March 10 2010, 04:56:48 UTC

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And so:

Apolo motions to the CD player and JR, of course, plugs in his iPod instead. Puts on Yankee Hotel Foxtrot (of course) and tips his head against the cool glass.

They drive silent through three songs. By the fourth JR is sitting up straight again.

Fifth track, Apolo's driving one-handed so he can lace his fingers through JR's.

In the aching ambience of the sixth, JR is whispering, so sorry, and Apolo is muttering back, only ever wanted to make sure you were safe,, and JR's laughing then, shaking his head, saying, "You goddamn idiot, you total douchebag, honestly - "

"What the hell? Seriously - "

Still laughing, dying down to a brilliant, beaming smile: "Like you're not the person I feel safest around in the whole world." Apolo raises one eyebrow, a trick JR's never been able to master. He just keeps smiling back anyway. "I trust you, you asshole. Can you trust me back on that, at least?"

Seventh track kicks in then, and Apolo doesn't speak, just takes a wide, aimless turn down a random street. It doesn't matter. His hand tightens in a way that definitely, positively means yes.

By the last track they're back to Apolo's apartment, but when he reaches for the key to turn the car off, JR tugs his hand back. "Wait. We're almost done."

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This time it's a kiss first. This time no one's skin gets bruised.

And in the background, Jeff Tweedy goes on singing, yeah I've got reservations about so many things, but not about you

not about you.

Re: sort-of-fill [8/8] anonymous March 10 2010, 05:06:32 UTC

Oh...my god. I think I'm in love with you.

This is just fucking brilliant. The set up and the tension and the amount of emotion you squeezed out of every paragraph was amazing. I want to crawl inside this fic and never come out again. I always want you to write a million more words of JR/Apolo because, damn, you have got it down.

Seriously, so good. I want MORE FROM YOU.

Re: sort-of-fill [8/8] anonymous March 10 2010, 05:18:16 UTC

OH MY GOD. APOLO/JR AND YANKEE HOTEL FOXTROT.

ILU, ANON.

Re: sort-of-fill [8/8] anonymous March 10 2010, 05:28:34 UTC

Awwww. This is great. So lyrical and lovely and sweet.

Re: sort-of-fill [8/8] anonymous March 10 2010, 05:42:59 UTC

Oh god, that was beautiful.

Re: sort-of-fill [8/8] anonymous March 10 2010, 06:04:52 UTC

that was just...perfect. the progression and tension and everything were just amazing.

Re: sort-of-fill [8/8] anonymous March 10 2010, 06:19:40 UTC

This whole story made me feel like I was moving underwater, you know, everything was there to be looked at carefully, but slowly, and the details were just gorgeous, and the physics was awesome, and this was just great. Yay.

Re: sort-of-fill [8/8] anonymous March 10 2010, 07:06:47 UTC

Holy sweet hell, that was beautiful. Romantic, but not cheesy. I have no words seriously.
You need to never stop writing and give us soooooo much moar. That was fucking perfect.

Re: sort-of-fill [8/8] anonymous March 10 2010, 07:08:52 UTC

This whole story was wonderfully beautifully fantastic. The writing was poetry. the metaphors and the tension and the build up and the imagery and everything was perfect. and this doesn't even make sense because this whole story left me speechless. and somehow my play list synced up perfectly with this and set the mood even better(not that it wasn't already perfectly set) and now i just want to read this over and over and over again.

OP HERE anonymous March 10 2010, 08:18:59 UTC

you took my prompt and executed it PERFECTLY. how the hell did you do that? it was touching, beautiful, hot, etc. omg you are amazing. thank you for writing this. <3

Re: sort-of-fill [8/8] anonymous March 10 2010, 23:06:27 UTC

Oh my god. This is seriously the most beautiful piece of writing on here. Absolutely breathtaking. Are you planning to de-anon? I'd love to read some of your other stuff.

Re: sort-of-fill [8/8] anonymous March 11 2010, 00:14:33 UTC

probably the best fic this meme has produced. A++++++++++++

Re: sort-of-fill [8/8] ferretmalfoy March 11 2010, 03:05:50 UTC

This is an amazing piece of writing. Absolute perfection.

Re: sort-of-fill [8/8] anonymous March 11 2010, 03:45:57 UTC

Your fic made me cry. No joke. It was beautiful and you've just influenced me into taking physics next year. Funny how little things change everything.

I can't even begin to sum up how /good/ all of this was. This is either one of the most or THE most poetic and beautiful and most insightful fic I've read on this meme.

Re: sort-of-fill [8/8] anonymous March 11 2010, 07:46:06 UTC

You made a Wilco reference. You made a Wilco reference. I love you.

And you know, the fill was fucking amazing.

Re: sort-of-fill [8/8] anonymous March 13 2010, 00:21:17 UTC

How are you so awesome?!?!
That was amaaazing.

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