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vail-kagami: All Fun and Games (Jack/Ten, Jack/Ianto) [PG-13]

Jun 22, 2009 23:13

Title: All Fun and Games
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pair: jack/10th doctor, challenge: pride, fanfic, author: vail_kagami

Comments 13

lefaym June 22 2009, 21:50:00 UTC

Ouch! Some lovely ambiguities in here, regarding Ianto's interactions with Jack (how much was the alien, how much himself, to what extent was the alien able to possess him because it played on his insecurities) -- and such a painful ending!

vail_kagami June 27 2009, 01:02:05 UTC

I thought it best to leave those questions open. Thank you for the feedback!

taffimai June 23 2009, 04:13:54 UTC

And now I'm crying.

vail_kagami June 27 2009, 01:02:48 UTC

Sorry. D:

teastainedbird June 23 2009, 16:45:35 UTC

D:
Ouch! Everyone is so broken.

And I don't even like Ianto usually. He always seemed a bit hollow to me as a character on screen but you managed to give him some dept.

vail_kagami June 27 2009, 01:03:45 UTC

I don't like Ianto either. I tried to do him justice as a personal challenge.
Thanks for reading!

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vail_kagami June 27 2009, 01:04:19 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm happy you like it!

ent_alter_ego June 30 2009, 02:04:57 UTC

This is good in a sad way. About halfway through I was worried it was just Ianto, but then the alien merging makes it okay and not character assassination. Sad, though, because of the idea that there's help for the world but not them. =( *sniffle*

vail_kagami June 30 2009, 21:54:05 UTC

Yeah, well... Life's not fair. Not even at Torchwood.
I don't like Ianto, but I still try to treat him fairly when I write him.