vail-kagami: Cassandra, Lost in Fornax (Jack/Ten) [G]

[vail_kagami]

Title: Cassandra, Lost in Fornax
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[nightrider101]

This was beautiful. I love the ambiguity of your writing because it leaves so much for your reader to interpret.

This line was gorgeous: He brings death more than the other, and yet it’s life he glows with, sending it out to jump from person to person and dance through the universe. He lives.

That's exactly how I picture the Doctor.

Spelling check: On of them carries all his life on the inside One?

Wonderful ficlet! Thank you so much for sharing!

[vail_kagami]

You're very welcome. I wrote it at night during my holliday, after spending the day walking my feet off.

Off the fix the typo.

[mahmfic]

interesting. ;-P very different.

[shinodabear]

This is gorgeous. The writing is absolutely beautiful and it's a nice, cozy, thinky piece.

[rose_cat]

Lovely and ethereal :) I like your subtler pieces. A couple of favorite lines:

Death is a part of him, death has eaten a part of him.

That one gave me a shiver. But your entire description of the Doctor is wonderful. And I like how you interpret, and describe, the contradictions in both of them.

(They can’t be touched by anyone but each other.)

And that warms my (shipper) heart :)

It's a clever response to the challenge!

[vail_kagami]

Thank you! With the auction fics to write this month, I wanted something short, so I did my best to finsih this while on vacation. I was dead timred when I wrote it, but I'm glad it works.

[evilawyer]

All his life is worn on the outside.

A very evocative, striking line that fits in very well inside this haunting story.

[vail_kagami]

Thank you muchly!