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caelith August 15 2008, 09:41:56 UTC
Oh wow! So damn powerful!

Think I'll have to add this one to memories.

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lilithbint August 15 2008, 22:34:21 UTC
Thank you,
they have both been so broken but stayed so strong,
I like to believe they find strength in each other.

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kensieg August 15 2008, 10:44:26 UTC
the Doctor isn't a murderer. Good story!

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lilithbint August 15 2008, 22:35:09 UTC
Thank you,
they both take so much responsibility on themselves I wanted to give them some peace.

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kensieg August 16 2008, 01:29:20 UTC
thank you! also they are not alone they have each other!

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skullgirl013 August 15 2008, 15:01:54 UTC
Wow, just wow =)

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lilithbint August 15 2008, 22:35:50 UTC
Thank you,
they have both suffered so much they deserved some peace.

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skullgirl013 August 15 2008, 23:36:25 UTC
That's for sure!

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shinodabear August 15 2008, 21:53:54 UTC
Oh, this is brilliant! Very unique, too. I just love the starkness of just the dialogue with the bits of italics here and there.

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lilithbint August 15 2008, 22:36:45 UTC
Thank you honey,
I wanted it to feel stark and lost so I'm glad I achieved it.

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rose_cat August 19 2008, 12:07:26 UTC
Lovely, and very clever!

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lilithbint August 19 2008, 20:34:17 UTC
Thank you,
I just wanted them to have a little peace for a while,
Glad you enjoyed it.

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