I told you so often but...I will repeat mysself: I love your dark angsty fics! Not many can write that dark and depressing like you, and I mean that in a very good way!!!
This scene... when the Doctor was looking for a telepathic bond or something like that. It felt so heartbreaking when he couldn't find any of it. Coz... he'll never be able to find it anyway. :( I loved it. So sad but true.
The Doc seems so lost and I like how you show him: as child. But powerful though. That's so him. He wants to see all those wonders in the whole universe but... still he endures so muc pain by doing so. *sigh* And I have to add: The beginning was wonderful. I'm infatuated with injured Timelord. That's kinda hot. And how Jack is trying to hold back. Wow. I was full of excitement!
And you know your last phrase is a killer, don't you? O__O Can't wait to read more. Happy day, first nightrider and then you are having an update :D
That's why I love your fics so much. Angsty. Dark. Really mean. Yeah. I like it because every single authour has his own style. But you keep on being creative. Inventive. Great!
Nightrider = LOVE! And yay, contains some injured Ten too :D
He retreats with a sigh. Runs a hand through the oblivious man’s hair, down his throat until it touches the blanket covering him. He isn’t going to kill him. He doesn’t care what the stones are telling - how could he ever hurt this man who has done so much for the cosmos and received so little in return?
It’s hard to turn away and leave him alone.
That was heartbreaking and beautiful. I love Jack's tender devotion. I also love how you write the Doctor. You're able to convey his alienness so well.
“So. Not a ‘once in a lifetime’ thing then?”
For a second he thinks there’s new surprise on the other’s face, shock even - like the possibility they could do this again never occurred to him. It’s gone in an instant and Jack stops thinking about it when the Doctor says:
“Sure. Why not?”
Did you hear my fangirl squee? ;)
This story is wonderful! I'm anxiously awaiting more!
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I told you so often but...I will repeat mysself: I love your dark angsty fics! Not many can write that dark and depressing like you, and I mean that in a very good way!!!
This scene... when the Doctor was looking for a telepathic bond or something like that. It felt so heartbreaking when he couldn't find any of it. Coz... he'll never be able to find it anyway. :( I loved it. So sad but true.
The Doc seems so lost and I like how you show him: as child. But powerful though. That's so him. He wants to see all those wonders in the whole universe but... still he endures so muc pain by doing so. *sigh*
And I have to add: The beginning was wonderful. I'm infatuated with injured Timelord. That's kinda hot. And how Jack is trying to hold back. Wow. I was full of excitement!
And you know your last phrase is a killer, don't you? O__O Can't wait to read more. Happy day, first nightrider and then you are having an update :D
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Off to read nightrider101's story now.
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I like it because every single authour has his own style. But you keep on being creative. Inventive. Great!
Nightrider = LOVE! And yay, contains some injured Ten too :D
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He retreats with a sigh. Runs a hand through the oblivious man’s hair, down his throat until it touches the blanket covering him. He isn’t going to kill him. He doesn’t care what the stones are telling - how could he ever hurt this man who has done so much for the cosmos and received so little in return?
It’s hard to turn away and leave him alone.
That was heartbreaking and beautiful. I love Jack's tender devotion. I also love how you write the Doctor. You're able to convey his alienness so well.
“So. Not a ‘once in a lifetime’ thing then?”
For a second he thinks there’s new surprise on the other’s face, shock even - like the possibility they could do this again never occurred to him. It’s gone in an instant and Jack stops thinking about it when the Doctor says:
“Sure. Why not?”
Did you hear my fangirl squee? ;)
This story is wonderful! I'm anxiously awaiting more!
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Thanks a lot! Your comments always make me happy!
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I'm not on Skype today because I have a lot of writing to do before Wednesday, but I'll remind you of it!
(This was kind of the reaction I was hoping for. :P)
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