trobadora: Thin Lines (Twelve/Jack) [PG-13] - SUMMER HOLIDAYS PROMPT #14

[trobadora]

Title: Thin Lines
Author: trobadora
Prompt: #14 - metalwork, astrophysics, The Odes of Santorum, Antediluvian
Rating: PG-13
Pairing/characters: Twelfth Doctor/Jack Harkness, Clara Oswald
Spoilers/warnings: none
Summary: "Get out if you don't want to regenerate today." - Sometimes, Jack hates the Doctor.

Comments

[adafrog]

Good, thanks. I could really picture that.

[trobadora]

Thank you very much, I'm happy this worked for you!

[ext_1198415]

Very complex story so much is going on between the characters especially whats left unsaid; unsurprisingly Clara seemingly is the one that knows whats going on from the start and is justifiably content with what happens.

[trobadora]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

[kronette]

Oh, nice. I'm liking this dynamic.

[trobadora]

Hee, thank you! Glad you like it. :D

[tardis_stowaway]

This is sharp-edged and excellent. I really enjoyed your use of Clara as an outsider POV on the Doctor and Jack's long, rocky, deep relationship. Your Twelve voice is great.

[trobadora]

Thank you very much! It's the first time I've written the Twelfth Doctor (other than one fic written prior to his first episode), so I'm particularly happy you liked how I wrote him. :)

[joking]

You have really good Twelve characterization here. I have no doubt this is how his interactions with Jack would go down.

"Well, why not?" the Doctor huffed. "He's a good kisser, no point in wasting it."

Somehow this line really stood out as pure Twelve!

[trobadora]

Thank you very much! I hadn't really written Twelve before, so I'm particularly happy his characterisation rings true to you. :D