GIFT FOR THE COMMUNITY: A time to die, A time to build (Jack/Ten) [T] (Part Three)

[wojelah]

Title: A time to die, A time to build
Author: luorescence
Recipient: the community
Rating: T
Pairing(s): Jack/Tenth Doctor, Jack/Eleventh Doctor (mentions)
Spoilers/warnings: Set after Waters of Mars for the Doctor, after The Wedding of Sarah Jane to be more precise. Future!Jack. References to all four seasons of Torchwood. TW: Dark and mental torture at one

Comments

[ext_1198415]

Okay I absolutely loved the entire tour de force' it has so many excellent parts that I can't decide which one is my favorite its all my favorite. I truly hope we see more of this universe its much to good for it to end here. “Not so smug now, are we, Captain?” made me laugh out loud which made the rest of my fellow officers look at me funny. But it was worth it! :) More please?

[luorescence]

I'm so happy you liked it (and thanks for your other comments by the way), I spend quite a lot of time on this one and writing Ten was a real pain in the beginning. He just wouldn't let himself be written.

Anyway, I'm thinking on expanding this universe so it's not the end of it.

[scifiangel]

So love this. Jack's just the one to stop him if he needs to be.

Love the end.

[luorescence]

Thanks!

[navaan]

Oh, this was really brillant!

"Oh. Right. Bringing Captain Jack Harkness back to his team from time to time. Duly noted. Anything else I can do for you?"

That made me smile.

I like that they come out of this okay and even have learned something about each other.

[luorescence]

I do think that no matter what happens between the Doctor and Jack, they'll always come out of it, at least, kind of okay.

Glad you liked it!