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megans_writing: Toy Soldier (Jack/11) [R]

Apr 18, 2011 14:00

Title: Toy Soldier
Author/Artist/Vidder/...: megans_writing
Challenge: 2011 Doctor/Jack Bingo Fest
Prompt used: grief
Rating: R
Pairing: Jack/11
Spoilers/warnings: AU. 1940s WW2. Hurt/Comfort. This is the much asked for sequel to In The MoodSummary: Jack is a Captain in the RAF and was injured in battle. He's been spending his time in a War Hospital under taken ( Read more... )

author: mahmfic, challenge: 2011 bingo, pair: jack/11th doctor, fanfic

Comments 14

beachy_geek April 18 2011, 18:54:15 UTC

Another war story! Is it a series now? Huh? Please?

I love the descriptiveness, and the alternate characters so different yet stll recognizable. And still mysteries about them both. Are they "people" or...? I just loved it!

mahmfic April 21 2011, 00:13:13 UTC

yes, it's a series now! you reviewers *wags finger* i listened for once and here i am. it's quite fun though. thank you so much for reading... i think you might have been the first reviewer for part 1 as well. ha! that's so cool!

beachy_geek April 21 2011, 00:25:54 UTC

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whogate April 18 2011, 21:06:03 UTC

Wow. I am loving this AU. I feel so sorry for Jack. What happened to Gray in this series? Please write more!!!

mahmfic April 21 2011, 00:15:58 UTC

i don't wanna answer the gray question just yet because your question is probably going to be answered. well, i am pretty sure it will be anyway since i have the idea in my head.

oh my goodness, someone feels sorry for jack? yay! *shifty eyes* you know what i mean, right? lol. no one else said they were sorry for him so... yay! haha.

thank you so much for reading!

Toy Soldier anonymous April 19 2011, 07:02:10 UTC

They kiss and the Doctor runs away...after admitting he doesn't love River. More please you can't leave it here. Also is Jack Immortal in this? Or is it a complete AU?

Re: Toy Soldier mahmfic April 19 2011, 19:05:03 UTC

thank you for reading anon!

jack is not immortal nor is the doctor a time lord, making this a complete an utter au. i have never done anything like this before. crazy...

and yes, i am not leaving it here. there's going to be 1-2 more parts. depending on how it gets written.

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mahmfic April 19 2011, 19:03:24 UTC

thank you so much!
more information will come in the next part. especially about the doctor. :-)

scifiangel April 20 2011, 05:19:20 UTC

I am so loving this series! The fish and custard made me laugh. Love the sexual tention between them. I'm very glad you desided to continue with the story line.

mahmfic April 21 2011, 00:11:23 UTC

it's one of those rare times (okay it's the first time) where i've listend to reviewers that said they wanted more. and i am having fun with it. thank you so much for reading!