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sahiya: Too Long Have We Tarried (Jack/Eleven, Jack/Thirteen) [R]

Mar 28, 2011 20:33

Title: Too Long Have We Tarried
Author: sahiya
Characters/Rating: Jack/Eleven, Jack/Thirteen; R
Word Count: 2300 total
Disclaimer: Not mine! They belong to the BBC and Moffat.
Summary: This was a Doctor Jack didn’t know.
Author's Notes: This is my first Bingo line (hopefully not the last) for the Jack/Doctor Bingo fest here at wintercompanion. I did this a little ( Read more... )

challenge: 2011 bingo, author: sahiya, pair: jack/11th doctor, fanfic

Comments 33

alt_universe_me March 29 2011, 05:44:50 UTC

Oh, this was sad and lovely and filled with yearning--just beautiful. <3

sahiya March 31 2011, 03:55:52 UTC

Thank you!

teamharkness March 29 2011, 05:52:04 UTC

Beautiful. Well done. I really like this. The segues were fabulous.

sahiya March 31 2011, 03:56:19 UTC

Thank you!

I'm glad you liked the segues. They're the trickiest part of a fic like this.

teamharkness March 31 2011, 04:13:37 UTC

You're welcome! And it is, but you did it marvelously.

dshael March 29 2011, 06:28:51 UTC

Oh, god, this is so beautiful. I laughed, and I blinked away tears. ♥

sahiya March 31 2011, 03:56:42 UTC

Thank you! That's a great compliment.

navaan March 29 2011, 09:39:49 UTC

This is so beautiful and sad! I just loved it.

sahiya March 31 2011, 03:56:49 UTC

Thank you.

firefly124 March 29 2011, 10:31:38 UTC

Oh! Such funny moments and such sad ones mixed in, and yet it all adds up to something lovely for the both of them.

sahiya March 31 2011, 03:57:18 UTC

Thank you! That was basically what I was going for; glad it worked for you.