Fic: Guilty Until Proven Innocent 2/? Hisagi/Kira.
Title: Guilty Until Proven Innocent 2/?
Author: winteraconite
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Hisagi Shuuhei/Kira Izuru, Iba+Nanao
Notes/Warnings: Formerly titled "Never Let This Go". This chapter is for ceestar who constantly motivates me like a madman with a whip (in a totally good and very much appreciated way, of course ♥) as well as all those who read and commented in the ( Read more... )
Author: winteraconite
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Hisagi Shuuhei/Kira Izuru, Iba+Nanao
Notes/Warnings: Formerly titled "Never Let This Go". This chapter is for ceestar who constantly motivates me like a madman with a whip (in a totally good and very much appreciated way, of course ♥) as well as all those who read and commented in the ( Read more... )
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This is, wow, I don't know what to say. I can hear the characters in my head as I'm reading. Everything is just beautiful, the way the writing flows, how the characts interact.
And gah, I was whimpering aloud as I read some parts. Heartbreaking in places, and still so absolutely wonderful.
Although... What didn't Iba tell Shuu?!?! *pounds table*
*anxiously awaiting part 3* Mary
PS. Appropriate icon is appropriate? ^-^
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I'm glad the characters and their interactions are to your liking! Neither the manga nor the anime delves into these characters very much so we are left with our imaginations and this is what mine coughed up. ^^
And ahahahaha I can't tell you! You'll find out...eventually (depending on when I can find the time to work on the next part and if my muse decides to help me out)!
Thank you for reading and commenting!
And yes, appropriate icon is appropriate! Kira = epitome of despair!!!!! ♥
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Well keep on a coughin' XD
Oh also, forgot to mention (which is why I should not comment when tired ^-^'), but I loved-in-a-break-your-heart-kinda-way Shuu's dream. Nearly crying, yup. Just lovely writing ^-^
Eventually? Mou... Is the muse poked by cookies? *offers*
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And, yes, eventually. But it might please you to know that I stayed up last night and worked on the third part! Got as far as three pages, too! ^^
But...I'ma take those cookies if you don't mind. XD
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And yes, yes, yes I shall give it my best shot!
Thank you for reading and commenting! ♥
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I am loving this so far. You've conveyed the mood brilliantly, and the characterisation's really working for me ^^. Like live_with_love said, you can hear the characters speaking as you read.
Keep up the good work. I want to know more XD
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I'm glad you like them, the mood (it was really hard to maintain) and the characterizations (this one had me tearing my hair out). I'm really glad they're working for you! ^^
thank you for reading and commenting! ♥
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Thank you for reading and commenting! ♥
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Stunning as always. I'm looking forward to seeing many other characters, not only because I'd love to see how you write some of them, but I think in emphasises how Shuu and Izu have been torn apart, what with someone like me being use to reading all of your fics with the two as the central, and often only characters in the plot. It'll be an interesting change~ (that doesn't mean I want you to stop writing Shuukira fluff)
I have my theories as to why Shuuhei will be mad... I can't wait to find out in my theories are right xD
Write, Antha, write *Whipwhip* (jokes, but you just put the image in my head~ I love you Antha ♥)
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I'm glad you think so! I had a little bit of a problem with this one because Iba and Nanao decided to dominate the chapter and I thought the ShuuKira dream sequence thingy was made of phail. But but but true, our boys can't always be in the spotlight (le gasp! Did I really say that?! XD).
And ooooh you're a smart girl, am sure some of those theories are correct. ^^
Writing, Master! Writing!!!!!! ::slaves away::
Thank you for reading and commenting, dearest! ♥
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