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Fic. My Mind is Set on You

Sep 16, 2010 11:03

Title: My Mind is Set on You
Author: alicebluegown16
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Will hasn't had a decent night's sleep in thirty-three days. But who's counting, right?
Pairing/Characters: Will/Finn, Puck, mentions of Rachel, Sue, Brittany
AN: For the winn prompt meme: Will has insomnia and Finn is the only one who makes it better. This is a sequel to All in ( Read more... )

contributor: alicebluegown16, !winn prompt meme, fanwork: fanfic, rating: nc17

Comments 12

eighthoctave September 16 2010, 16:28:24 UTC

wow. That was really good you totally capture the utter fucked upness of an insomniacs brain, my dad suffered from it for a while, freaked me out a lot. You did a great job with this, and you can't beat a bit of NC 17 every now and then :D

therandomgirlie September 16 2010, 16:35:37 UTC

Wow.
WOW.
That was awesome. Heartbreaking, cute, and awesome :D

madmenfanatic September 16 2010, 19:18:47 UTC

favorite lines:
*"It’s like the most fucked up Dick Clark countdown ever."

* Telling Sue to fuck off and die.

* And when real-Finn started to rub Will's back on the bus and Will said it was inappropriate, Finn said, "NO ONE CAN SEE US." Meaning, Finn doesn't care it's inappropriate or that Finn deosn't think it is wrong, so if no one else knows about it, then everything is okay. I think that is huge and that Will needs to reflect on it - and accept it.

You responded to a different review of mine earlier today that you don't mind emotionally torturing Will. I groaned because Will suffering means "I" don't get the hot sex I want between the two. Ah, then immediately after I read this fic and it was win/win (ha ha). You got to have Will's angst, I got to read some really awesome smut.

thank you, thank you, thank you.

flupf September 16 2010, 20:37:47 UTC

i love this one! it's so beautifully wirtten and really... touching? xD i love the way you write will, that's so in character. also i loved the way you brought finn into the story and the busride and awwwwr <3
dunno. it's really cute and really awesome ;D
and i do need more of it. i need more winn in general. hope for mor stories when season 2 finally started xD
anyway - GREAT job!

momoda6 September 16 2010, 22:01:06 UTC

lol @ Ralph Wiggum's evil leprachaun ( ... )

alicebluegown16 September 16 2010, 22:08:05 UTC

True confession:

I don't know where I'm going with this. I mean, I have a vague idea of it finally, finally ending in Will being happy because good googly moogly does the boy deserve it, but how to get there?

No Clue.

So, this should be fun.

But glad you liked cracked out horny guilty nothing so lose sleep deprived Will.

And sad to say almost all of his insomnia experiences were based on my life. Yes, even the thinking you've forgotten how to comprehend English thing. I am not kidding, scariest moment ever.

momoda6 September 16 2010, 22:13:43 UTC

It should be fun. :3 I'm sure it's gonna be great whatever happens.

That does sound really scary. D: I keep having moments where I can't understand what someone's saying, but I never put it down to lack of sleep, I always figured I was going deaf. Which.. is much better. x_x It starts to get embarrassing when you say 'sorry, what was that?' for the 9th time.