WIP - Perfect Sky is Torn

[dark_dreymer]

Title: Perfect Sky is Torn
Author: dark_dreymer
Part: 10/10 (So far)
Word Count: 5910
Rating: R
Warnings: Angst, Language, Mild Sexual Content

Comments

[health_hazzard]

Oh god I've been away for awhile and just popped back in and found this amazing piece of work. I've always been wary of 'found out+consequences' stories but I'm glad I took a chance on this one. It has a sense of realism with the plausible legal issues without being too depressing and I think that works very well to keep the angst at a good level. I also think the fact that Will is forward about Finn being the one who approached him BUT that he didn't hesitate and is unapologetic about it is a good way to go. The approach of 'must resist forbidden love-but wait I can't' has been done a lot.

I do wish that there was a little more interaction with the other glee members besides Rachel/Quinn/Kurt. After the scandal and selfish backlash they had, I think the other members could have developed new perspectives on the situation by now and come forward (other than Puck obv.). I'm mostly gushing right now so I can't find too many things this fic needs critiquing. I just hope you decide to continue this soon.

Oh and I LOVE unexpected family members fyi lol.