WIP Not what it looks like

[laeathearcher]

I think this was a prompt from the meme that I meant to write as a gift for someone but then never finished. Sorry about that.
Tawg, I've done my part of the bargain.

Comments

[tawg]

A+ Sandy Ryerson! His line was just so in character it was amazing. This is probably, like, the first fic I've seen him in. Which is a shame, because he's a hilarious nemesis.

The tickling ones was really cute, and I loved that the Jazz Band had this vibe of "Oh, it's just Mr Schue molesting a student again. Just try to set up around them, okay?"

What are your other two scenes? Teelllll mmeeeee *poke poke*

[laeathearcher]

The beginning of one is supposed to bring them to Mr Schue's house and then an awkward situation I CANNOT THINK OF would ensue. Then the other has Kurt walking in on them and Will being all Not what it looks like! and Kurt's like Your hand ISN'T in Finn's pants? Okay sure.

[tawg]

Are they all going to be 'person walks in' awkward situations? Because, you know, the Will's house one would be a GREAT excuse to put Terri in one. I watched Ballad the other day, and just how over she is re: students crushing on Will and Will collecting strays. Like, they could be practically making out, and Terri would just be "Christ, Will, do you HAVE to encourage them? And if you do, why can't you encourage them to make some cookies or something? For the record, Finn, I'm a big fan of snickerdoodles." Or you could have everyone's favourite substitute, Holly Holiday (if Will is dating her at the time), come in and just be all "Are we talking about feelings? I really feel that a yoga circle would help whatever it is you're going through. That and shots." And Will would be all "No giving students shots."

Haha, oh Kurt, well done.

[dark_dreymer]

I think I remember this prompt from back on the meme so it's good to see someone took a stab at it. The scenarios you've used to get Will and Finn into these "It's not what it looks like" situations feel very realistic and you get major props from me for including the Jazz Band because they get like no appearances in fic since people treat them like furniture

[laeathearcher]

The Jazz Band is ALWAYS THERE. Watching. Waiting.

Yeah I didn't think about the time he's been between guys fighting before. I just figured cause Finn's in football and young and energetic it wouldn't be too hard to have his homely teacher pinned.

Don't thank me! I only posted this so tawg would post hers. Have you read it yet? It's amazing and it breaks my heart that it's not done!

[dark_dreymer]

I understand your reasoning and I see your viewpoint, I just wanted to give the kind of feedback I'd offer if I were betaing.

Read, mostly enjoyed, commented. Not sure if I'm gonna be helpful or just annoying, more likely the latter.

I guess to be fair I shall have to post my own WIP. I need a buffer with Sina Libbu Ziana since my family were less than cooperative with my plans to write over the holidays. I'll post the next chapter and then start posting my WIP during the gap while I work some more... The, uh, WIP is 60K-ish btw. My muse hates me.

[laeathearcher]

Oh Dreymer. What are we gonna do with you? Your stories would be wonderful but they NEVER END!