you come and go, for yunsias

Jun 06, 2015 11:53

Title: you come and go
Recipient: yunsias
Pairing: Seunghoon/Seungyoon
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: general political/state unrest
Summary: Kang Seungyoon is a political activist and Lee Seunghoon is an aspiring artist. The only overlap in their lives is a soon-to-be-discontinued bus route.
Notes: dear recipient, thanks for the prompt! <3

Kang Seungyoon notices the guy on the bus on the first day of second term. )

pairing: seunghoon/seungyoon, ! 2015, rating: pg-13

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yunsias June 7 2015, 04:55:08 UTC

I'M SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!

I admit that I haven't sat down and read the fic yet because I'm still quite busy BUT I'M SCREAMING BECAUSE YOU CHOSE MY FAVORITE PROMPT OF THEM ALL! And the amount of research you've done, AMAZING THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS ;___;

I'll be back with a proper comment after I'm done with my things and read this but I want you to know that two of my tlist were screaming over how good this was!

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yunsias June 10 2015, 14:25:38 UTC

I FINALLY SAT DOWN (more like stood up since I was reading this on the train) AND READ EVERYTHING.

I WILL LEAVE AN EXTREMELY TL;DR 10-PAGED ESSAY ON THIS but I want to do it when you cross-posts, I hope you don't mind ;( but I really really really love this and this is the sort of story that just lingers in my mind even after I've finished reading because it's just so lovely and captivating

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idolkiller June 20 2015, 19:37:18 UTC
omg don't worry, I'M JUST GLAD YOU LIKED IT!!!! i was rly worried that it would be boring or not what you had in mind while i was writing it so this is such a relief u___u;;;; i loved the idea a lot (it's exactly my type...) so thank you once again for the prompt!!

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fashcndy June 7 2015, 19:23:58 UTC
i rly liked this. i dont even think i've ever rly thought about 2seung much but i rly liked the tone in this. omg the ending. nuuuuu

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idolkiller June 20 2015, 19:57:25 UTC
it's a relief to hear that the tone worked for you, thank you!! i only started thinking about 2seung recently and i absolutely love them...

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galmaegi June 9 2015, 08:37:40 UTC
this is so good! you conveyed the atmosphere of modernization and unrest so well and it really felt like the time period and the place to me. (i say like i was there...) i loved all the details: seungyoon hanging out with krystal and huh gak and taehyun, the constant threat of danger in the background, the fashion, the music, seunghoon working part-time at the docks. everybody felt fully realized and fleshed out, like they were just living their own separate lives and happened to collide. also, ngl, i love your sexually liberated seunghoon and how you worked jinwoo and mino in u___u and the tone of the ending is so perfect, i hope they get away ;; thank you so much for writing this!

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idolkiller June 20 2015, 22:10:33 UTC
weren't u, i say again (jk i love u chad gull michaels)

THANK YOU FOR THIS NICE COMMENT T___T it means a lot, esp with how much i fretted over all those details particularly (sry about that too... u___u;;;) like they were just living their own separate lives and happened to collide this was EXACTLY what i was going for so i'm soooo glad you said it >__< I LOVE SEUNGHOON, this is secretly just hot bf seunghoon propaganda. sadly ksy never appears again... well maybe 15 years later when everything's settled and they both work in respectable offices --> segue to salarymen au

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kalopsia June 14 2015, 01:00:33 UTC
wow i am completely in love with this fic? like just the way you brought everything together was soooo good. despite, obviously, never having lived in busan 1986, all the cultural references, the details about fashion, technological growth, the way you weaved in the political and cultural climate of 1986 south korea into the fic so naturally, made me feel so nostalgic. i really like the way you structured this, two different stories that cross paths every now and then, before eventually colliding. your writing is so clean and detailed, and i think you nailed the tone of this fic supremely well. i sorta expected the ending, just because the danger was always lurking in the background and i was always really tense throughout. and you had them finally come together, and everything explode, in such an impactful way ( ... )

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idolkiller June 20 2015, 22:28:05 UTC
thank you so much!! i'm really glad the environment and ~historical details worked for you (and even made you feel nostalgic! gosh >__<) bc when i have all this bg info in my head that sets the scene it's sometimes hard to tell how much of that comes across to the reader. AND ACTUALLY the structure was something else i was concerned abt bc usually i write pretty linearly and deliberately tried something ~different this time so!! this is heartening feedback :')

wannabe trendy seungyoon ISN'T HE what a silly dumpling >__< hot seunghoon is my mission in life so heh excellent >:) and every other part of their lives is so busy, and then they share this slight dull, quiet commute together wah this is so lovely ;; THANK YOU <3

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