Comments | winks7985: ... And Sometimes They Win, Mag7 ATF AU, Gen Part 2/5

winks7985

... And Sometimes They Win, Mag7 ATF AU, Gen Part 2/5

Jan 10, 2011 20:27

Title: ...And Sometimes They Win
Rating: R for language
Characters: All Seven, with a lot of Ezra and Nathan
Universe: ATF
Word Count (this part): 4,946
Summary: This is continuing the story started in Gone Wrong and After. If you have not read those, you will be lost. Ezra is continuing to have difficulty adjusting to his situation, and the boys ( Read more... )

writing, series: gone wrong, mag7 fic

Comments 16

ktrisha January 11 2011, 01:47:36 UTC

Great chapter. Well written. You captured all of Ezra's agnst perfectly.

winks7985 January 11 2011, 01:48:46 UTC

i'm glad you enjoyed it, and thanks so much!

:)

vintrackergirl January 11 2011, 03:32:32 UTC

Banter--yay! Bad JD humor--yay! Major angst and guilt for Ezra--yay! (for me, not him!)

I think this chapter has everything covered. ::nods::

winks7985 January 11 2011, 13:18:12 UTC

yay! i'm glad it all worked.

more to come soon...

:)

grachonok January 11 2011, 06:31:10 UTC

Good chapter, great guys, poor Ezra.
But I really think that the shrink who cleared Ezra for field duty should find another job...

winks7985 January 11 2011, 13:21:50 UTC

yes, poor poor ezra.

as for the shrink... ezra is very good at hiding things, so he probably pulled the wool over the shrink's eyes pretty well.

plus, it can take a while for things like this to develop. so he may have been more fine when he was with the shrink, and started to deteriorate as time goes by. he also has a hard time asking for help, so he would let it go for longer than normal people would, i think.

but another job for that shrink wouldn't be out of the question... :)

grachonok January 11 2011, 14:07:23 UTC

At least he/she should have thought of some follow-up appointments... or warned the guys about the possibility of delayed reaction:).

winks7985 January 11 2011, 15:30:24 UTC

hmm.... i like this. i may have to remember this...

can you imagine what would happen if any of the guys ran into this shrink (as i imagine they would, if he/she was a department shrink)?

*writes this down*

Thread 5

fanficfan83 January 11 2011, 16:03:38 UTC

Poor darling Ezra, he needs many, many hugs... would it be possible for you to jet him off to England so I can look after him?! (Just keep the bad guys over there as I'm quite delicate!)

That was another wonderful chapter :-)

winks7985 January 11 2011, 16:15:21 UTC

don't worry, he'll get hugs!

but i think i could figure out a way to get him to england for you... ;)

i'm glad you liked it.

fanficfan83 January 11 2011, 20:53:56 UTC

Thanks, I'd love Ezra to come and visit! :-D

zeuses_wild January 11 2011, 21:44:07 UTC

He had left his jacket, wallet and keys at the table with his friends.

He had no idea where he was going. He just knew he wasn’t staying here.

Oh that can't be good. What have you got the poor overwrought boy doing?

I'm glad the guys aren't all "durrr" about Ezra acting weird; they're not brushing it off (this happens a lot in fanfic for some reason!). The guys all feel like a cohesive unit when you write them; it's one of my favorite things about your stories.

Hopefully they chase him down before he gets mugged or nabbed by some bad guys or something without his ID on him.

winks7985 January 11 2011, 21:54:01 UTC

hee! i know, this can't end well!

and yes, i know what you mean about the rest of the guys seeming to brush off one of the others acting weird. sometimes you can think "they're just giving him space", but other times it's flat out like HUH?

The guys all feel like a cohesive unit when you write them; it's one of my favorite things about your stories.
OMG thank you! i try to make them as much of a unit (hehehe i said unit) as possible, while not losing who they are in the process.

and yes, let's hope Ezra doesn't get into too much mischief...
:)