Fic (Ace Attorney/YGO 5D's): The Beauty in Suffering

[winhall]

Title: The Beauty in Suffering
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Kristoph/Apollo, Divine/Apollo
Disclaimer: I don't own Ace Attorney Yu-Gi-Oh! 5D's.
Warnings: BDSM, 3some hints
Summary: In which Apollo acquires a number of skills and Kristoph entertains a guest.
Note: This one's for karnimolly, MERRY CHRISTMAS! *hugs you all over* Sooo, this one has Kristoph and Divine

Comments

[karnimolly]

FINALLY I GET TO READ THIS!! *__________*°°°

Though he supposed that there was a chance that this was secretly common among attorneys he highly doubted it, and was convinced that these methods weren't in any way known to or approved by the public.

Oh Polly you're such a smart cookie <3

Also Jeanne's dancing lessons are showing <3

and it made him calm to think that he could please Mr. Gavin even with something minor.

So eager to please! *3*

Like the new focus on the tying up you're choosing here. Of course tying up always is an aspect of BDSM, but you're setting a whole new emphasis on this part of the whole matter and I find that very interesting and a nice change :3

Mr. Gavin smiled at him as he always did and then destroyed every bit of normalcy when he said, “Apollo, kneel.”

Let's get down to business right away! |DD
Also somehow... reading something new about Divine makes my stomach tingle a bit. I guess I missed him.

Mr. Gavin tapped his foot once and Apollo abruptly came out of his frozen state

asdfghjk what a nice but very subtle gesture to get Apollo's attention!

At the same time he felt utterly humiliated by the way the two men discussed him, like some pretty animal someone had found or bought.

Why Apollo, I don't see what's bad about that. You see, Kristoph and Divine both love their pets a lot :>

It was the kind of danger Apollo would have expected from the accused and guilty, not from a prosecutor

*is all over this part*

“Interesting.”, he remarked and moved on.

Gawd I love the fact that Apollo has SORTA psychic powers and Divine would find this such a nice coincidence <3

he knew how to hold this position for a long time, had done it before to the point of complete exhaustion.

Yes, definitely liking the emphasis on this... well to me rather unexplored aspect.

“Yes, I thought you'd remember it.”

What a nice hint~

I wonder whether Apollo has any idea how fucking dangerous his position is, or how dangerous the men around him are. I mean, he's at Divine's mercy and only Kristoph's protection gives him safety. KRISTOPH of all people. Oh poor boy! >__<

“So. Is he the one?”, he asked, an allusion to something Kristoph had told him years ago.

OH GOD THIS OH GOD THIS SO MUCH!! *_____*°°°°°

Everything is elegant psychopaths and nothing hurts!! :DDD
Oh man Divine and Kristoph will forever kill my brain.

Thank you so much for writing this, the combination of Kristoph and Divine with their threatening position and Apollo being completely helpless and so eager to do everything just as Kristoph says! As I mentioned earlier, he has no idea in what danger he actually is there. He may sense it, but he has no idea. Such a pretty pet. But not Kristoph's perfect pet...

ASDFHJKL thank youuuu~!! >/////< *hugs*

[winhall]

Also Jeanne's dancing lessons are showing <3

Yesss~ and I thought it suited Kristoph. XD
I was secretly imagining Kristoph and Klavier dancing as children and it would be the cutest thing in the world.

Why Apollo, I don't see what's bad about that. You see, Kristoph and Divine both love their pets a lot :>

Something I couldn't get into the fic: Kristoph being a dog person while Divine prefers cats. <3

Gawd I love the fact that Apollo has SORTA psychic powers and Divine would find this such a nice coincidence <3

Me, too! I could have written a whole fic about... OMG Apollo in the Children AU. It would be beautiful! That boy with his huge sense of justice and everything!

I wonder whether Apollo has any idea how fucking dangerous his position is, or how dangerous the men around him are. I mean, he's at Divine's mercy and only Kristoph's protection gives him safety. KRISTOPH of all people.

Yes yes yesss!
He hasn't got a clue, not really, and I kinda wanny show it to him, unveil all the danger...

Everything is elegant psychopaths and nothing hurts!! :DDD

This would have been a wonderful summary. XD

Such a pretty pet. But not Kristoph's perfect pet...

*nods* I had a whole bunch of comparisons to Klavier in my head, but I couldn't fit them in, the fic would have gone in a completely different direction. ^^;;

Anyway, glad you liked it! =)

[karnimolly]

ASDFGH tiny Klavier about 14 years old and Kristoph being 21 or so... dancing together... ^///^

Thing is... I'm wondering... Apollo does have a strong and fierce will and mind, I wonder whether he's influencable enough to warp his mind so that the only justice is on the side of the AM... However, I bet Divine would manage.

Well the things Divine told Apollo weren't really what you would call sweet nothings... I guess he'd put his words into action at some point...

The fic is perfect just the way it is, and the subtle hints to Klavier are very nice <3

[winhall]

Apollo does have a strong mind, and right now Kristoph is conditioning him six ways from Sunday. Divine is a master at that himself, he might just manage to make Apollo believe in the justice of the AM (provided he gets him young enough, which shouldn't be a problem, the boy's an orphan).

Ach, Klavier~

[karnimolly]

Really the image of Divine picking up rebellious little teenage Polly from the streets is just too pecious <3