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Under the Radar

Feb 22, 2011 01:22

Title: Under the Radar
Author: windfallswest
Fandom: Naruto
Pairing: Hatake Kakashi/Umino Iruka
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: <----
Length: c. 1,500
Notes: A short, porny sequel to Winter in a Bottle (which I have now reposted with some revisions at my journal now the reveals are out) I wrote to finish out my notebook. Not too many questions answered but, well, I' ( Read more... )

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kansouame February 22 2011, 15:14:32 UTC

*fans self*

That was hawt.... now.. we need to get Kakashi some rope. *grin*

windfallswest February 22 2011, 20:33:59 UTC

Thanks!

Kakashi will get his hands on rope. Even if he has to twist it himself. From the hair on his back. Dammit, Kakashi-the-pirate-AU, go away! I have a paper to write!

salmastryon February 22 2011, 15:35:51 UTC

I totally approve of this porny sequal.

I also cracked up so hard people were wondering why I was laughing when kakashi came out covered with whtie sunscreen so you couldn't' see his tatoos.

windfallswest February 22 2011, 20:30:49 UTC

Well, in all fairness, you've seen his skin tone. He'd totally turn into a tomato in fifteen seconds without substantial intervention. Glad you like!

tucuxi April 28 2011, 00:48:52 UTC

I like that this one's from Iruka's pov. :) And I just about burst out laughing at the idea of Kakashi walking out smeared with zinc - but damn, if he doesn't need it. He'd be a lobster in minutes otherwise.

The snifter was classier than any drink Iruka would have expected Kakashi to order. At least, it was until it caught fire.

That line cracked me up.

Also? guh. Think I melted. Well done. :)

windfallswest April 28 2011, 03:05:23 UTC

The dignity of a sorcerer must be maintained. Sunburn is not an option.

*g* one does one's best

Re-reading, because yay. tucuxi July 24 2014, 17:40:56 UTC

Still love this. ♥

I find the idea of zinc sunscreen being more dignified than sunburn hilarious. Handy for preventing people from seeing all those tattoos, too.

Inquiring minds want to know: So did Kakashi and Iruka ever talk about Iruka being Other? Because Iruka doesn't seem to mind when Kakashi calls him a red-eyed boy.

Re: Re-reading, because yay. windfallswest July 24 2014, 23:12:12 UTC

It's mostly the tattoos; I imagine you have to be at least as careful about about magic tattoos as regular ones.

I had it vaguely planned that the lead-up to the Voo-Doo Wars was going to catch the boys on vacation and the Wars themselves would get kind of merged with the Nine-Tailed Fox/Uchica massacre backstory (they are all kind of pale and dramatic, but Sasuke as a vampire might be an irredemably bad idea, re: the level of brooding and angst even the internet will countenance). There was going to be some running around in the jungle, but then I was going to have to figure out the Voo-Doo Wars in at least general outline, and that's probably what ultimately bogged it down.

At this point, Iruka and Kakashi have not talked about it, although they're both more or less on the same page. They'd have to have a discussion somewhere in all the projected bushwhacking, just for practical reasons. But mainly I figure the secret villages have a different attitude towards the Others. I mean, they're all concealing themselves from the world ( ... )

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