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FIC: Of Boys and Men (1/1)

Jan 12, 2007 01:33

Title: Of Boys and Men
Author: CherylJLuv
Fandom: Supernatural and Smallville
Pairings: Chloe/Dean, Chloe/Sam
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: None of this is mine, unfortunately.
A/N: My first short fic AND my first supernatural fic. Hope you guys like it. There might be a sequel, though I'm still not sure.

Slouched down in her seat in one of the Talon's ( Read more... )

ship: chloe/dean, rating: pg, fanfiction, user: cheryljluv, ship: chloe/sam

Comments 8

welshchicky January 12 2007, 02:18:30 UTC

Ooooh that was a great story, love Chloe and this certainly sounded like her. I can see why she prefered them over Clark, if someone has fallen has hard for Lana has he had than their not worth it. And even though there's only one chapter any chance of more Dean/Chloe in the future? It was a lovely story.

xtremeroswellia January 12 2007, 05:56:02 UTC

Oh dear God. PLEASE do a sequel. I will beg. I'm not even kidding. This was SO very Chloe and so very Dean and Sam that I actually squeed out loud. LOVED it!! Please please please continue!! <3

wander_lust_79 January 12 2007, 07:07:56 UTC

That was amazing.. they need to speak.. to meet.. please continue this.. bravo!!!!!!

tehzo January 12 2007, 07:49:52 UTC

This was wonderful. I really enjoyed the tone of it...you did a great job in capturing Chloe's voice.

Her normally positive outlook on life had faded lately, and it seemed that all she was left with was unhappy musings. Yes, the future had never looked so bleak. Even her reporting skills appeared to be waning a little.

Things must be really bad for Chloe if she's so down under that she's thinking negatively about her reporting skills.

The guy noticed this, though, and flashed the girls a grin before striding into the Talon to sit down next to the college guy.

Typical, beautiful, arrogant Dean...

I usually love dialogue but this was great even without. Despite their parts being short, you wrote Sam and Dean's mannerisms perfectly. If there is going to be a sequel, I'm definitely looking forward to it.

Of Boys and Men kidkarmina January 12 2007, 07:57:47 UTC

are you sure this is your first short fic =)??!!! i'm so hoping you'd do a sequel!!! very much so.....very good start; i hope it's a start and not the end =)!

looking forward to some more of your work. thanks a bunch.

joanna