Seesaw

Mar 10, 2008 05:38

Title: Seesaw
Pairing: House+Wilson friendship
Author: Alanwolfmoon
Rating: PG-13ish
Prompt: 135.House and Wilson are having an argument (yelling, cursing, etc), and Wilson has either: a heart attack, a stroke, or a seizure.
Disclaimer: MINE! ALL MINE!....uh, no. Not mine.
Notes: Reviews and flames alike are welcome. (They make it look like I'm writing ( Read more... )

round 2 fic

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chowrie March 10 2008, 13:27:38 UTC
Great read. House telling the medic the details, the EXACT details, of Wilson's stroke was brilliant. His genius made sure that everyone knew exactly what to do with Wilson. House repeatedly telling them where in Wilson's brain the problem was and his symptoms,even those he didn't experience would have been hilarious if Wilson didn't just suffer a stroke. He couldn't control how much brain power he was wielding. But all of this is so House. House couldn't have lived with himself if he performed below par. This is Wilson we are talking about here.

sorry... I had to edit this comment earlier. my typing skills weren't cooperating.

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alanwolfmoon March 10 2008, 13:42:21 UTC
yepeyep!
(lol, you have no idea how long it took me (armed with highschool biology and an anatomy book) to figure out the medical details of this...)
glad you liked it!

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xgraciela March 10 2008, 16:45:50 UTC
Oh..poor Wilson - giving himself a storke...*hugs him*
I like how House knew every little detail and was trying to tell it to the others.

Great fic! ^^

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almightyspaz March 13 2008, 17:43:04 UTC
I love how much detail you put into this. Good story.

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tourmaline1973 March 13 2008, 19:52:45 UTC
Love this, especially the House & Cuddy scene. Very nice =)

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mitfordgal March 13 2008, 20:36:49 UTC
You captured nice emotion here!

Just a few things: you should go back and capitalize everyone's names - Foreman and Bonnie are two of the ones you missed. Secondly, you say that Wilson's second wife hit him with the golf club but later you say it was Julie... Julie was wife #3, Bonnie was wife #2.

Sorry, hope you don't mind my corrections - once a beta, always a beta!

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alanwolfmoon March 13 2008, 22:32:56 UTC
nope! it was appreciated!
(i always have trouble keeping wilson's wives straight...)

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