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Is it me, or do we NEVER ACTUALY SEE BELLA BEING CLUMSY?
She talks about it, but we don't see it.
My conclusion?
This is a first person narrative: She's convinced she's clumsy, so whenever she does mess up, totaly naturally, she takes it as more proof of her being clumsy.
I man hell, she's smart, she can cook, and cook well, she has a good memory (not once do we hear her having trouble with any subjct OTHER than gym, and Gym is hell for merely unathltic people. I'm cordinated and -I- fell down alot in gym)
So far (pg 71) it reads like a girl's diary. Self invovled, self pitying and kind of whiny.
Writing is thick and dull. Teen-genre fiction, light gothic fantasy, nothing specail, but not esspecaily BAD either.
She talks about it, but we don't see it.
My conclusion?
This is a first person narrative: She's convinced she's clumsy, so whenever she does mess up, totaly naturally, she takes it as more proof of her being clumsy.
I man hell, she's smart, she can cook, and cook well, she has a good memory (not once do we hear her having trouble with any subjct OTHER than gym, and Gym is hell for merely unathltic people. I'm cordinated and -I- fell down alot in gym)
So far (pg 71) it reads like a girl's diary. Self invovled, self pitying and kind of whiny.
Writing is thick and dull. Teen-genre fiction, light gothic fantasy, nothing specail, but not esspecaily BAD either.