I'm generally an easy-going person when it comes to fandom and fic, I generally only have nice things to say/positive feedback and it's all very much deserved. I'll be the first to admit that I'm not the best writer (not by a long shot). But when I see Cannon-Raping as bad as it was in a story I read yesterday I want to Cry. Icon very much relevant
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What you need to know:
Sentinels: People with enhanced senses (in cannon there was only one) These senses can be overwhelming if they aren't kept under control.
Guides: Only vaguely dealt with in cannon (and never like this). In cannon we are given the impression that there is someone 'attached' to the Sentinel who helps them keep their senses under control.
This story is a Cluster-Fuck of Epic proportions. But I love you for being willing to read it for me.
http://angelee-corner.tripod.com/id12.html
ILU BB, and will have brain bleach ready and waiting for whenever you give up.
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You are a lot braver than I am. I just can't go on. I admit defeat. *shudder*
OMG, even if the two year old child talking/acting like that didn't annoy the shit out of me, the whole face licking thing squicks me hard. And I'm not all that squickable.
Add the grammar and typo issues (huge, might I add), and the bouncing PoV, I'm surprised anyone got past the first little bit. Is this stargate?
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It's The Sentinel.
Yeah... I got nothing...
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You know what else squicks me about this story? The constant use of "baby" by the ten year old. It's creepy.
Yeah, I thought that too. But in my mind I just started substituting the characters name for each instance of 'baby'.
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