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willow2883

Sweet Hostage - Chapter Eight

Dec 17, 2011 11:31

A/N: Some people were complaining that the chapters for Sweet Hostage were a little too short, while others were getting impatient for Bella to finally tell Jacob what her second request was. Since I am one of those writers that desperately want to make everyone happy, this chapter is over 5,000 words, which can be read successively for those of ( Read more... )

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enov10 December 17 2011, 21:14:01 UTC

whew! that was hot!

willow2883 December 22 2011, 05:14:59 UTC

Thank you! I was hoping! I kept waiting for inspiration to hit me, so when it didn't, it became a 'just sit down and write something!
I'm actually pleased with the way it turned out. :)

ihatecanonbella December 17 2011, 23:49:31 UTC

You sneaky little witch! You tricked me! Anyway so hot I had to stop have way through

willow2883 December 22 2011, 05:16:40 UTC

I tricked you? How did I trick you? *confused*
Anyway so hot I had to stop have way through
That's the nicest compliment you could give me. Thank you! :)

ihatecanonbella December 23 2011, 05:14:56 UTC

You said it was her truck as themsecond favor? *raises eyebrows* did you change your mind ? >doubtful

willow2883 December 23 2011, 06:11:17 UTC

Oh hon! I was teasing you! I assumed everybody knew what the 2nd favor was gonna be.
All my fics are kinda lemony. So most people knew where I was taking it. Sowwy. :(

jjsmom8506 December 18 2011, 07:18:26 UTC

Wow! *fans flushed face* That was amazing! Go Jake :)

willow2883 December 22 2011, 05:17:26 UTC

Haha! Thank you bb! *grumbles* Lucky Bella. :P

sammyb170 December 19 2011, 09:22:20 UTC

Aww, I KNEW that that was the second favor!
Haha, love this story dear.
Keep writing :D

willow2883 December 22 2011, 05:18:49 UTC

I teased a couple of readers that she was going to ask him to work on her truck when they got back. And they believed me!! LOL
So glad you're enjoying. Thank you! *hugs*

exquisite_ugly December 28 2011, 03:50:19 UTC

Sorry I'm so late with my review.. this month has been a bitch! But regardless.. *loved* the chapter! Very hot! Damn lucky girl! Great sex scene, hon. Glad they got some things out in the open, too, beforehand.

And Bella's teasing Jake was quite cute. ;) Great chapter!

willow2883 December 28 2011, 04:06:32 UTC

Thank you! Yeah, feel a little relieved now that that second favor is out there and taken care of. Virgin sex is getting old for me. LOL
I was going to have Bella get in the shower with Jacob, but thought, nah, Bella would never do that! I came up with the stealing his clothes idea when I was taking a walk and had to RUN home so I could write it down before I forgot! LOL

exquisite_ugly December 28 2011, 16:47:39 UTC

I am totally with you on the whole virgin sex thing. lol I still do it occasionally in OSs, but this next fic is not going to be virginal. hehe

And you sound just like me.. I have to run for paper when I have an idea. I forget too easily. ;P