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Sweet Hostage - Chapter Three

Nov 25, 2011 20:15

A/N: I want to thank the lovely and amazing Mist for my new banner! Thank you bb!

Chapter Three

Jacob glanced over at Bella. Her head was at a weird angle against the headrest and her mouth was slightly open. She looked tiny with the white lace billowing out ( Read more... )

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jjsmom8506 November 26 2011, 05:35:16 UTC

Aww! Poor Jake.
"He suddenly felt like a girl on prom night."
I giggled at that. Poor guy is still just a kid. I'm loving his attention to detail and how careful he's being about tracing them. It's good to see Bella not appearing to regret her decision of running away either. It's about time that girl made up her mind!

Fantastic story so far. I can't wait to see more!

willow2883 November 26 2011, 21:21:35 UTC

I'm loving his attention to detail and how careful he's being about tracing them
Jake's attention to detail so they don't get caught is due to my paranoia! LOL There's nothing worse than writing a fic and making a mistake (and it happens) and having the readers call you on it! There are so many people that get in poor Jake's head (the wolves and Eddie), and Edward can just pluck everything out of anybody but Bella's - it would be hard to make a clean getaway. Luckily, Jake told Paul and Sam very little. Or maybe not so luckily, cos if there's any chance that Bella didn't go willingly...
Thanks so much! And I'm glad you're enjoying. :)

ihatecanonbella November 26 2011, 05:59:29 UTC

He didn’t care how much they’d fucked things up today. He was just happy to have his Bells back.

This is just a picture perfect moment in the fuckedup world of Jake and Bells. I loved it. This story is 108.9 of fantastic.

willow2883 November 26 2011, 21:23:15 UTC

This story is 108.9 of fantastic.
Aww, thank you. That's so clever. I like it!! :)
Yeah, it's effed-up, but it's Jacob. I'll take a little effed-up with Jake over FOREVER with Eddie. LOL
Thanks sweetie!

willsherun November 27 2011, 20:58:26 UTC

Runaway fics are so good, no matter how many there are. Can't wait to see what you have coming.

I live for Jake and Bella's effed-upness. Its a very beautiful thing.

daintress November 28 2011, 16:09:58 UTC

I'm sure she'll tell him soon enough. Lol! Can't wait to see what Edward makes of all this...

exquisite_ugly December 1 2011, 16:52:31 UTC

Hmmm, wonder what Bella wants. *raises eyebrow* ;)

I have never heard the whole cricket and temperature thing.. is that true or are you making that up? *eyes you suspiciously* hehe

Enjoyed Jake's nerves and questions.. a girl on prom night. heh. Glad Jake got her away and safe. Great job. :)

willow2883 December 1 2011, 19:01:18 UTC

Can you tell the temperature by listening to the chirping of a cricket?
Yes!The frequency of chirping varies according to temperature. To get a rough estimate of the temperature in degrees fahrenheit, count the number of chirps in 15 seconds and then add 37. The number you get will be an approximation of the outside temperature.
I just googled that for you - I couldn't remember exactly how you did it! LOL I knew it was true though. And I've listened to them in different types of weather - they get very infrequent in the cold months and then chirp, chirp, chirp their hearts out in the summer!
Hmmm, wonder what Bella wants.
Um, she just wants Jake to check under her hood before they get back. *wink*
Thank you! :)