Anna's Song: Chapter 5

Oct 09, 2006 10:07

Next chapter up. Sorry this one is a bit short, but yeah the next one will be longer and more dramatic. hope you all enjoy! and constructive criticism is very welcome.

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thegoodbyegir1 October 9 2006, 14:21:59 UTC
haha i know... i couldn't think of any other way that was realistic tho.
thanks for reading! i haven't been overly motivated lately either which is why this chapter is so short! next one should be action packed tho.
and yeah things with anna and will are gona work out soon...

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thegoodbyegir1 October 10 2006, 00:17:17 UTC
yeah thats true, its great when in just flows. lucky you have spare time at work!

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muesli_sunshine October 9 2006, 15:49:27 UTC
nice chapter once again ^^

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thegoodbyegir1 October 10 2006, 00:17:44 UTC
thank you! thanks for reading too =D

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anonymous October 9 2006, 17:22:03 UTC
great job! another nice chapter...and then that part about Skandar...lol. that was awesome!

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thegoodbyegir1 October 10 2006, 00:19:48 UTC
thank you so much!! yeah i wasn't sure how to handle the skandar situation, but i'm glad you like it!

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xsay_goodnight October 9 2006, 21:50:38 UTC
Awwh, poor Skandar. He did seem to grow up from all the other LWW stories, but I guess it comes with being taller, lol.
Great chapter, once again.

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thegoodbyegir1 October 10 2006, 00:20:33 UTC
haha yes height has a huge impact on how mature people are ;)
thanks for reading!

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lil_piggy23 October 9 2006, 22:19:43 UTC
awww :'( that was so cute at the end!

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thegoodbyegir1 October 10 2006, 00:21:20 UTC
thank you! and thanks for all your comments, i'm glad your enjoying it! hopefully new chapter will be up soon...

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