Oo. Awesome. I wonder what they need the blood for. And he doesn't know Dana is an android? I wonder how that will work out when he discovers the truth. I like the title of the series and the ideas you presented here. This definitely sounds like something I would read from what I know now.
Also, I know it's your journal and all, but is it at all possible for you to be blank lines in between paragraphs? Sometimes I get confused as to when it's a real break or not. It happened mostly with the last one, but I just find it easier to read personally. Of course, it's just a suggestion.
I shall read the rest of your February entries later. Have to finish packing. :)
Ha, even I don't know what the blood is for, I was just making things up. I know Michael has some ~sinister destiny~ in the story but I don't know what yet.
Yeah, I could be better with paragraph spacing. Sometimes the processor I'm typing in (like Google Docs) is a lot wider than the journal is and line breaks look clearer or its spaced differently, and I forget to change the breaks when I paste it into the journal.
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Also, I know it's your journal and all, but is it at all possible for you to be blank lines in between paragraphs? Sometimes I get confused as to when it's a real break or not. It happened mostly with the last one, but I just find it easier to read personally. Of course, it's just a suggestion.
I shall read the rest of your February entries later. Have to finish packing. :)
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Yeah, I could be better with paragraph spacing. Sometimes the processor I'm typing in (like Google Docs) is a lot wider than the journal is and line breaks look clearer or its spaced differently, and I forget to change the breaks when I paste it into the journal.
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