Fic: Inertia - Part 13 [The Closer]

[wildwildwood]

Title: Inertia - Part 13 [The Closer]
Rating: PG - 13
Ship: Brenda/Sharon
Disclaimer: Not mine; never were! No copyright infringement intended.  Laura's my own, but she's not a major character.  The song mentioned, not mine - but it found its way into my brain about a week ago and hasn't left since.  Sorry.

Summary: With Fritz gone, and her

Comments

[obsessive_a101]

*also sighs* Just - this. LOL!

It's really interesting how you've fleshed out their relationship, and it's so pitted - with so many doubts and uncertainties and just... *sigh* :)

[wildwildwood]

They are - that's the problem with being both beautiful AND brilliant, they overthink EVERYTHING!

I guess that's what happens, you can only avoid thinking for so long...

[lindy999]

Oh, please let them both see that they belong together. This is just breaking my heart.

[wildwildwood]

But where's the fun in THAT?! ;) What's that old saying - it's always darkest before the light? Would I drag this out for as long as it's going only to break them up for good?!

[madampresident]

Oh wow! Powerful stuff! Great chapter, as usual, darling! Can't wait for the next chapter and I hope your portfolio is coming along! ♥

[wildwildwood]

Slowly but surely, it is - at the very least if I don't get into the program, I'll have gotten back to what was once my usual work ethic!

Thanks for asking - and thanks for the comments! Can't wait for more of yours... I seem to remember a certain blond asking a certain brunette to ask her out... You don't want to keep Brenda waiting...

[madampresident]

What kind of portfolio are you putting together? Writing? Art?

[defyingnormalcy]

I love how you pretty much wrote that Sharon is in love with Brenda without explicitly saying so:

" All the little things you take for granted when you fall in love is what you miss when it's gone.

She wondered what she'd forget about Brenda."

LOVING this fic so much. One of the best Brenda/Sharon multi-chapter fics I've read recently. :)

[wildwildwood]

Awwww - thanks so much for the sweet complement - I'm really glad you like it! I worry I make Sharon out to be too morose sometimes, so I'm glad you enjoyed that little bit!

[caity_love]

I love how natural this all seems... Its powerful and subtle in all the right places.

[caity_love]

Oh and I love your depiction of Martha Raydor and her interactions with Brenda!

[wildwildwood]

Thanks - power and subtle are two very great complements to receive! I think subtle may go out the window with a future chapter, so I'll take what I can get now! :D

PS - I've had to re-watch BSG for an assignment, and EVERY.DAMN.TIME. I see Laura at the board I giggle and think of your icon!

[caity_love]

Hahaaa I know! Once you see it, you can't unsee it!!

Though, I'll admit, I can't help but think of yours when I think of hair. X.x