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angelqueen04 in wildwest_lantis

Fic: Too Late

Jul 04, 2006 18:07

Title: Too Late
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fanfiction, john/elizabeth, daniel/sha're, daniel/vala

Comments 20

ankareeda July 4 2006, 22:42:24 UTC

Very lovely! *melts*

angelqueen04 July 4 2006, 22:50:17 UTC

*blushes* Thanks!

alianne July 4 2006, 23:04:08 UTC

beautiful!! :)
I love the friendship between Daniel and Elizabeth, and that he feels kind of protective about her. Really interesting.
And I like how you told this from Daniel's perspective.
Great job, really liked this!!

angelqueen04 July 5 2006, 01:42:15 UTC

*grins* Credit goes to Miera for the idea of Daniel and Elizabeth's friendship. I just built on the foundation she built in Dance Partners.

Glad you liked hearing from Daniel's point of view! :D

sg_lab July 4 2006, 23:55:05 UTC

Melts into a puddle of goo at the thought of John kissing Lizbeth on the hand.

I can really see this kind of relationship between Daniel and Elizabeth. Lovely story,

angelqueen04 July 5 2006, 01:43:50 UTC

*grins* Hoooyeah. I was a melting as I wrote that part. *sighs dreamily* Lizzie is one lucky lady... If I had a guy like that at my beck and call... I would have run off with him long ago... ;)

miera_c July 5 2006, 01:03:01 UTC

When Elizabeth uttered a good night to him and turned to enter the building, Sheppard caught her hand in his. She stopped and turned to look back at him, a questioning look on her face. Absolute silence reigned as he slowly raised her hand up to place a gentle kiss on her knuckles.

*melts*

I am such an enormous sap

angelqueen04 July 5 2006, 01:45:37 UTC

*cracks up* If you're an enormous sap for turning to goo after reading the above paragraph, what does that make me for actually writing such mush? :)

*cuddles Sparky adorableness*

world_of_blade July 5 2006, 06:10:58 UTC

::is puddle on the floor:: That was so cute. I love hearing it from Danny's POV. Vala cracks me up, a story that I have rolling around in my head involves this "couple" heavily.

Well done!

angelqueen04 July 5 2006, 12:15:34 UTC

Ooo! Really? A fic that heavily involves Vala and "her Daniel"?! *bounces excitedly* I hope we get to see it when you have the time to write it!

Glad you liked the cuteness factor I tried to instill! :D

world_of_blade July 5 2006, 18:30:01 UTC

I am going to try and type something about it tonight...who knows, maybe everything will just fall out perfectly on screen, and I can post it soon.

angelqueen04 July 5 2006, 22:11:45 UTC

*squeaks* Good luck!