Thoughts of a Newcomer, meta, beta?

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Hello, strange new world of SGA AU! Having found this community through the Sparky!fic of irony_rocks, I went back and read it from the beginning, and was addicted... and that brings out the Muses. Thus I'm seeking opinions on a tangent arc for Samantha and Jack, my pet pairing.

ETA: Still need a beta, if anyone's interested.