TF (OC): Searchin’

[wildernesstales]

Rating: PG
Series: G1
Summary: This is the back-story for my OC Tracer.  Rescue and the aftermath and the realisation that you don’t call your tracker a cat or she will get her claws out
Warnings: None for this part… fluffy cuteness in one bit?
Disclaimer: As per usual, the good things in life are not mine to have, but belong to someone else... in

Comments

[mmouse15]

Well, I've been a bad kid and haven't been giving you a lick of feedback on this. Why does RL always seem to intrude? So, this is for all five chapters, 'kay?
I like Tracer. I like how descriptive you are of her build and her sensor arrays. I have a good picture of her in my head from everything you've written.
I like the team that Red Alert has put together and I like how they all function. You've really given the sense that this is a team, that they work well together, play well together, and care about each other. The 'puppy pile' at the end of chap 5 was cute!
Bringing Soundwave in was well done and you got his character written very well indeed. You're writing good descriptions of the battles and conveying how disorienting and chaotic they are. I am going to be interested to see what, exactly, Soundwave wants with Tracer.
All in all, a very good backstory and you're doing a wonderful job. I promise to be a better reviewer.

[wildernesstales]

Oh wow... RL intrudes when you never want it too! Thank you so much for the feedback! It's nice to know I haven't made her too Mary-Sueish and that she's believable! And I'm pleased that the team camaraderie has come across! The 'puppy pile' was too cute to resist! :)
I'm still not entirely sure what Soundwave wants or whether it's just the Decepticons want the best on their side.

Thank you ever so much for the feedback!