Help?
Wondeirng if anyone could do me a harsh beta? I have a beta but could do with another just to check things over. Been having concrit and discussions with a flista of mine and I think it needs another look over before it's done.
It will be a five part Mal/Jayne/Simon series but so far stands at two chapters, it's a prompted fic and the prompt is this:
Thanks Bookaddict!
Mal & crew are making a delivery on this planet while Simon with River possibly others, go to the markets for trade.
Simon finds himself in the position of helping someone out medically, but these people are a bit backward & he does something that they initially take offence to, helps someone he shouldn't be touching etc? Maybe Jayne has to accept responsibility for him or something? Or both of them. That's the real bare bones, if you want to see the full thing I can email out but they want Simon/Jayne/Mal, threesome, first time bottom and virgin Simon.
It will be a five part Mal/Jayne/Simon series but so far stands at two chapters, it's a prompted fic and the prompt is this:
Thanks Bookaddict!
Mal & crew are making a delivery on this planet while Simon with River possibly others, go to the markets for trade.
Simon finds himself in the position of helping someone out medically, but these people are a bit backward & he does something that they initially take offence to, helps someone he shouldn't be touching etc? Maybe Jayne has to accept responsibility for him or something? Or both of them. That's the real bare bones, if you want to see the full thing I can email out but they want Simon/Jayne/Mal, threesome, first time bottom and virgin Simon.