Across the Line - Chapter 6

Sep 25, 2013 22:41


Title: Across the Line
Author: wild_terrain

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jaeho, across the line

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schloupen September 27 2013, 14:41:53 UTC
Ha! YunJae imnida! XD

I like this chapter! Even though Jaejoong was still vague in telling his past and Yunho was only showing a sneak peak of his, it still reveals much about them. And i'm definitely intrigued by Jay's past. The way he skipped over almost everything is very interesting. He really seemed like he had a really dramatic life. I hope he didn't kill someone. haha. I'm really curious about the reason why he shunned everyone in his life. I mean, if you're really close to someone, you wouldn't just treat them like they didn't exist one day just because of teenage angst and whatnot. Perhaps... you're playing Jaejoong-is-adopted-and-everything-is-a-lie card? But that card is not enough to ignore the people who nurtured you. Hmmm...

Anyway, I also thought that Jay might be Yunho's childhood crush, but as Jay said, the calculations doesn't match. But I still have that inkling that Jay is Yunho's crush. Or maybe Jay's one of those boisterous friends of Yunho's crush. idk. You said both of them have intricate pasts so my guesses are probably off the mark. heh. I try.

Oooh, also I'm glad that Jay is warming up to Yunho. I still think his distaste at Yunho on the first few chapters is unfounded. And YunJae is definitely on friendly terms now, if I take into account the Yunho-hitting-Jaejoong-with-a-tennis-ball moment and the Yunho-posing-for-silly-pictures-while-riling-up-Jay moment. Those were really amusing. :D

I'm assuming that Jay's outfit is the one in their Saipan Vacation...

I'm really excited about their brainstorming for the event. I imagine that Yunho would be there too and he and Jay would have a friendly banter and everyone else will be shocked since it is common knowledge (except for Yunho) that Jay has this distaste for Yunho and then Yoochun and Seunghyun would make bad puns out of it and did I just write a very long run-on sentence? go kill me now. The Grammar Nazi in me is twitching.

And I think Jay wouldn't be deleting those photos Yunho took. Maybe he won't delete them just to spite Yunho or for his personal amusement, but whatever it is, I think he won't be deleting them.

One last thing! When you said "Quick note about Yunho and Jay’s D&M," I thought D&M stood for something perverse like S&M or Deep Mouthing (which does not exist, btw. I thought that was another term for Deep Throating but then I realized that mouth and throat are different parts of the body so it can't be it).

I'm looking forward to Yoochun's entrance and Jay's buzzing feeling on the next chapter!

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wild_terrain October 18 2013, 08:40:17 UTC
Aww yeh, we all have our demons. Some more than others. JJ has a very complicated backstory but I can absolutely assure you that there was no killing amongst that. =P

Yup yup, the extent of JJ's shunning seems to be large. Some of that is just your normal family issues but as for his grandmother... Mm. Why did JJ shun her too...

Oh yes, the crush situation. Maybe JJ really is and he got the calculations wrong. Maybe he was linked in another way... We shall see very soon. >D

I think even JJ was starting to admit to himself that his attitude towards Yunho has been unfounded... There for a reason, but still unfounded. At least he's starting to admit it... Sigh.

HAHAH!! You are absoltely right! I totally had JJ's Saipan outfit in mind when I was writing that part. XD

Run-on sentences are my enemy... I'm pretty sure I do it all the time so don't worry. T_T

But LOL, I love your scenario! It might be a bit early for the public YJ banter but I cannnnnot wait until Seunghyun and Yoochun start noticing JJ and YH's aura. >D *claps hands like a little girl*

LMAO I think you are very right about those photos. He might justify keeping them to himself but....that delete button shall not be touched. XD

Hey, I am sure Deep Mouthing exists in SOME FORM. God knows what, but still! LOL. I don't even know how "D&M" came into popular usage over here... I guess we're just so lazy we can't even say full words anymore. ^^;;

Thank you so much for reading and your awesome comment! <3

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