Unfinished Story

[wighty]

Unfinished story.  Explanation will be provided if requested, but the post is too long otherwise.

EDIT: OK, I figured out what was making the post too big and fixed it.  This is a part of what I hope will be a series of stories about mythological monsters in a modern setting with a slight undertone of horror.  If the project gets too intensive, I

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[phoenix_prose]

*SCREAMS* Curses, DL, where's the rest? HOW DID SAINT GET ALL BURNINATED??

Also, damn, I wish I could write first-person as well as you do.

Also also I miss you ;; Are you still abroad and having fun?

[wighty]

A-Ah I don't know when I'll have the time to get the rest out. I stayed up really late a few nights back and wrote this because I was *inspired*~, but yeah.

I don't usually do first-person! This was kind of an experiment, but I'm glad you liked it! Thank you!

I do too! Oh, Memento Eden. T_T I am still in Taiwan and working, yes! Speaking of, I have to go and start preparing in a few minutes so I'll leave off here and ask how you're doing!

[danidanidanica]

Gonna agree with Phoenix. You are too awesome at writing. I wanna see moooore.

[wighty]

Ah, thank you! It's not true, but thanks anyway. =P I will try my best to get out the rest this weekend. How've you been lately, Dani? I seem to see you up at odd hours.

[danidanidanica]

Are you calling me a liar? D:

O-odd hours? Well uh. That. Might possibly have to do with me accidentally permanently skewing my sleep schedule to the point where I usually can't fall asleep until around 6AM.

Possibly.

[wighty]

Let it be known throughout the Fifteen Lands that DaniDaniDanica is incorrect and may in fact be lying through her teeth. =P

That's probably a bad thing. =( You should get back to sleeping regularly. Maybe nudge it back a half hour a day?

[regalblaze]

This was really, really good. ♥ You've got a great gift for first-person... and dangit, I do wanna know what happens next. Congrats, you've gotten me hooked.

[wighty]

Ahh, thank you very much! I appreciate it. =) Any advice for potential improvement?

If I don't get around to it this weekend, I'll, uh. Put up a summary? >_>;;

[regalblaze]

I sadly can't think of anything at the moment. :< If I ever do, though, I'll definitely let you know! I do have to warn you: I'm a huge fan of concise writing after years of suffering through purple prose, so the only advice off the top of my head is "don't spend five paragraphs describing a table." ... Yes, I actually suffered through that. It was painful.

Aww! Don't worry about it. I promise, I can wait, so don't worry about hurrying it up or anything. o/ Writing comes and goes, after all.