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I am so drained. Beyond drained. I slept for so long today. It was simply because dreams are better than reality right now. I feel like my entire world is crashing down around me. I had a small minor sort of nervous breakdown tonight. It will get better. Faith. I just have to have faith. I don't know if I could handle any more.
Half-day today! Woo-ness! Yea! Okay, I'm done. lol. Really. It's so exciting, isn't it? I plan to get more writing done. Speaking of writing...
I wrote another poem today! Oh, and I think it's ok...I guess. Not great, by any means. Not great. Kind of only half good. There's one line that bothers me and I don't know how to fix it. I'm sure you can see it. It's glaringly bad.
We lay under the sheets,
smelling the sweet scents of summer.
A strawberry sherbert sunset
and white cotton streaks against the sky.
Smelling the sweet scents of summer,
we laugh, talk, and play.
And white cotton streaks against the sky,
summer tasting like ripe juicy peaches.
And white cotton streaks against the sky,
a strawberry sherbert sunset.
Summer tasting like ripe juicy peaches,
we lay under the sheets.
What do you all think? You know what I just realized...many of you may not even read my poems so I was thinking. I have my other lj which is writergirl1988. I think I'll just put all my writings there. If you want to continue to read my poems or other things I write (and I don't expect you to...only add me if you really want to, please), go ahead and add me. :-D
Night all. I'm gonna catch some more shut eye. Not like I don't get enough already. I want to see if I can get 18 hours in one day and still function like a normal person, going to school and all that. I have a Perspectives meeting later tonight. That bites because I don't have the layout ready. I'll do it today. Maybe. Perhaps. Eh...whatever.
Half-day today! Woo-ness! Yea! Okay, I'm done. lol. Really. It's so exciting, isn't it? I plan to get more writing done. Speaking of writing...
I wrote another poem today! Oh, and I think it's ok...I guess. Not great, by any means. Not great. Kind of only half good. There's one line that bothers me and I don't know how to fix it. I'm sure you can see it. It's glaringly bad.
We lay under the sheets,
smelling the sweet scents of summer.
A strawberry sherbert sunset
and white cotton streaks against the sky.
Smelling the sweet scents of summer,
we laugh, talk, and play.
And white cotton streaks against the sky,
summer tasting like ripe juicy peaches.
And white cotton streaks against the sky,
a strawberry sherbert sunset.
Summer tasting like ripe juicy peaches,
we lay under the sheets.
What do you all think? You know what I just realized...many of you may not even read my poems so I was thinking. I have my other lj which is writergirl1988. I think I'll just put all my writings there. If you want to continue to read my poems or other things I write (and I don't expect you to...only add me if you really want to, please), go ahead and add me. :-D
Night all. I'm gonna catch some more shut eye. Not like I don't get enough already. I want to see if I can get 18 hours in one day and still function like a normal person, going to school and all that. I have a Perspectives meeting later tonight. That bites because I don't have the layout ready. I'll do it today. Maybe. Perhaps. Eh...whatever.