"Drifter"

[wickedvmpotter]

Drifter

Comments

[steppinrazor88]

I liked it ^_^ It could have used a little more description, but it's not terrible without it since it is a short story.

: )

[lilredcaboose4]

I enjoyed reading your story. If it were longer it would need more detail but it is short so the amount of detail is fine. I also think that this would make a great plot, or even first chaper of a novel.

[newmoonxxo]

Random person commenting lol. I loved it. It could have used some more detail but it was great. Your quite a writer. Nice job.