Leave a comment

Comments 11

elphies_galinda April 16 2009, 19:46:59 UTC
Oh wow.... I really liked this. ^_^ It seems like there's not very many good fanfics lately (though the ones that I have read are great), but this was almost perfect!

I really did love this. Keep up the good work! :D

Reply

toss_toss_love April 17 2009, 00:10:08 UTC
*blushes*
Thank you for the high praise.

I'm so happy that you loved it. Look out for my series "Too Good". A new chapter should be posted soon-ish.

Reply

elphies_galinda April 17 2009, 16:22:45 UTC
Ooh, I'm DEFINITELY looking out for it. :D Have you posted other chapters to it? *goes looking for it*

Reply

toss_toss_love April 17 2009, 17:06:27 UTC
It's posted here and at my writing journal toss_toss_love. It's probably easier to find it at my journal. Just click the tag "too good". :D

Reply


(The comment has been removed)

toss_toss_love April 17 2009, 00:11:18 UTC
Thank you. I tried to really capture the feeling with this.

Reply


valiant_one April 16 2009, 20:50:49 UTC
Ooo, so sensual. :) Very lovely job. I'm waiting for more from you. ;)

Reply

toss_toss_love April 17 2009, 00:12:33 UTC
:D Thank you. I originally only had Elphie kissing her shoulder, but they couldn't keep their hands to themselves. haha More will be coming... sometime.

Reply


vjb2006 April 16 2009, 21:36:18 UTC
Definitely a unique take on the post-WWO moment. Thanks for sharing!

Reply

toss_toss_love April 17 2009, 00:13:29 UTC
Thank you. I was worried about re-hashing this scene again.

I'm all about sharing. :D

Reply


runawaytrain31 April 16 2009, 22:19:43 UTC
I don't care how many "on the road" fics there are; this is perfection. I read those last three paragraphs probably 20 times and I'm still a little speechless.

Reply

toss_toss_love April 17 2009, 00:14:51 UTC
Wow! Thank you. I don't think anyone has called my work perfect before.

The last three were definitely intense. :D

Reply


Leave a comment

Up