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[bellahellabella]

Hi everyone, I'm a newbie, coming with freshly written fic. Constructive critism begged for.

Title; None, so far.
Subject; Book
Rating-Gelphie and NC-17, but for thoughts, not actions.
Summary; Glinda thinks
Disclaimer-First Fanfic, unbeta'd if spellchecked. I gave fair warning.
All Maguire's. Credit to the fantastic moosemeister.

Comments

[lfae]

I could be constructive, or I could just fangirl you madly and beg for more ;) That was a brilliant character-study, and so especially of the way Glinda sees Elphaba - I loved " Elphaba imagined nobody noticed when she disappeared, a notion so incorrect Glinda could not fully articulate it" - perfect :D I adore thinking Glinda :)

[yan00b]

Um, yay? Is that coherent enough? I actually read this at like 3.30 am, and I LOVED it. But I was too all over the place to actually be able to write a good review. I thought this morning would be better. Not so much. Glinda thinking, ah, what a beautiful occurance. OH, and this line:

Galinda had always supposed the other figure was shadowy because she hadn’t met him-the rich, possessing of good bloodline, kind and soft-handed man she would marry- yet. Or anyone else who made her hum with desire like those hidden, pulpy novels swore she would.

More soon? Please?

[thesinwithin]

... ooo. -swoons and dies happily-

[rockinmysocks]

lovely! i loved it! i like your style of writing. I hope there will be more soon

[alicia_1121]

Yeah...I really liked this fic. I can't even think of anything in it for you to "work" on, constructive or not! I honestly didn't dislike anything. Except...uh, it was too short! Yeah, that was a problem. Work on that.

I look forward to the next chapter.