I love your Holly, so vulnerable and real. Their reunion was touchiing and you depicted the nervousness of both of them beautifully...great work as always!
I have never disliked Holly (and never seen her as the evil vilain) but, in this story, I really like her. I especially loved her reaction when she met Scotty ("Look at you," she nearly whispered. "You’re beautiful.").
And I’m writing this small because I’m feeling a little stupid! :D I’m not really sure of what is exactly a frat party… That’s those student parties where there is a lot of alcohol? And "Frat" stands for "Fraternity", those sort of groups of students that have names composed of Greek letters (like I've seen a lot on TV shows ;))? That's it? :)
you are correct :) == Oh! Love this chapter! But I can't help but feel that there might be a really big shoe drop after this chapter with how happy and excited both Holly and Scotty seem to be. After all, we are only on chapter 9 of a 30 chapter story.
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^^ mark it on the calendar I agree with Holly
I think this is my favorite chapter so far!! I love supportive Kevin(happy birthday to me). Have I mentioned that I LOVE this story?!
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Thank you and happy birthday!
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I especially loved her reaction when she met Scotty ("Look at you," she nearly whispered. "You’re beautiful.").
And I’m writing this small because I’m feeling a little stupid! :D
I’m not really sure of what is exactly a frat party… That’s those student parties where there is a lot of alcohol? And "Frat" stands for "Fraternity", those sort of groups of students that have names composed of Greek letters (like I've seen a lot on TV shows ;))? That's it? :)
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Oh! Love this chapter! But I can't help but feel that there might be a really big shoe drop after this chapter with how happy and excited both Holly and Scotty seem to be. After all, we are only on chapter 9 of a 30 chapter story.
*anxious*
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Thank you!
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