Comments | whoreoftortuga: The Briar and The Rose: Chapter Ten

whoreoftortuga

The Briar and The Rose: Chapter Ten

Apr 25, 2007 17:42

The months passed into Evie’s twenty-third year and the climate of Tortuga was changing. At first it was subtle, like the far distant scent of cannon-fire on the breeze that sometimes swept into the bay and Evie thought perhaps it were simply that she were getting older though her mirror still reflected back an altogether pleasing countenance. But ( Read more... )

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deepseasiren April 25 2007, 08:12:55 UTC

Why can't I find a guy to 'fuck me mercilessly'?!

I've been reading your fanfic Briar and the Rose since it was recommended to me by another LJ member...I don't remember who it was when I first came here to your journal. I love the way you write, girl. As you said yourself your stories are more like vignettes with detailed character personalities rather than constantly moving and changing plotlines.

" Working six weeks straight" Ouch. Yes, Evie needs a break...

Excellent job, WofT!!

whoreoftortuga April 25 2007, 08:19:55 UTC

thank you for readin it so fast! *big grin* yay!

deepseasiren April 25 2007, 08:21:50 UTC

What I do is I speed-read longer fanfic ( I really did take a speed-reading class after school when I was in high school) and then I go back and print out the fanfic and read it more thoroughly when I'm at work on break or in bed. That's how I read your other chapters...I printed them out so it's like a real book :)

whoreoftortuga April 25 2007, 08:23:55 UTC

lol! cool! i can read about 1500 words a minute, but i don't think that's speed reading. i'm impressed!

rushysgirl April 25 2007, 18:45:54 UTC

WOW!

That was bloody fantastic! Gawd, I could read this all day. Sooo damn good!

whoreoftortuga April 26 2007, 01:37:18 UTC

THANK YOU *big hugs*

desibarbossa April 27 2007, 01:20:55 UTC

Oh, that was absolutely luverly, darling. Excellent work. Captured a lot of emotion in that one, you did.

whoreoftortuga May 1 2007, 00:07:41 UTC

thank you *Hugs* glad you enjoyed it, I found it a challening but great chapter to write

cazcatharsis May 1 2007, 16:10:03 UTC

*Cracks knuckles* alright, i'm late, i know...
me go read

okay, my eyes are all teary now... stupid curse... and owwy poor Evie! that final kiss was just darling... and i'm very glad she gave him a verbal bitchslapping, though he really can't help how things are for him right now (sorta) but he really deserved it. lol

YESS pirate_dutchess May 3 2007, 20:16:09 UTC

A new chapter, been waiting for it eagerly :-D
I can't read it now :(
I'm ready to go to sleep to get up early and go see the dentist before going off on a long weekend.
I can assure you Monday first thing I'll read it (maybe tomorrow with breakfast even) and comment right after!
Thanks for another one mate :)