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whoaluke

On the Ground: Chapter 7

Sep 08, 2009 09:58

Title: On the Ground (Chapter 7)
Fandom: Supernatural (Dean, Sam, Castiel, etc.)
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2,868
Date written: 1 September 2009
Summary: On the ground, conditions are rough, everyone misses home, and they all feel the tides shifting, the approach of a great confrontation. Then Castiel is given a human charge. Nothing has ( Read more... )

supernatural, slash, fanfic::dean/castiel, on the ground

Comments 10

juanitatequila September 8 2009, 20:03:02 UTC

Oh the tension!! Can't wait for more. :D

whoaluke September 8 2009, 23:59:36 UTC

Hi Juanita! Wow, your icon is making me dizzy! Haha! Thanks so much for reading. I'm hoping to update again soon. (o:

laura_trekkie September 8 2009, 22:34:06 UTC

Oh boys!

I can see why Cas would feel a little overwhelmed by all those different sensations, but I do wish he hadn't run off like that. Now Dean's all angry and out of sorts. Can they sort this thing out in the four days left before things kick off?

It amused me that Sam caught on and was himself amused :).

Laura.

whoaluke September 9 2009, 00:01:25 UTC

Hi Laura! I'm glad you could see why Castiel was feeling overwhelmed... I'm not sure what else could be expected. He doesn't know what he's doing. In waaaaaay over his head there. Dean - yeah, well. It's Dean. Let's hope they can sort it out in the next four days. That would be unfortunate to face the end of the world on different pages, eh? And I'm glad Sam amused you. Hehehe. He's perceptive, that one! (o: Thanks so much for reading and leaving me a note!

fingersofdawn September 9 2009, 02:44:35 UTC

*So, so good* The kiss scene ='d perfection. I love this fic ^_^ ::happiness::.

whoaluke September 9 2009, 04:44:32 UTC

Hi fingersofdawn! Thanks, I'm so glad you liked it! Hee! (o: Hopefully there will be more coming soon. Yay for happiness! (o; Thanks for commenting!

secretthought September 9 2009, 05:47:36 UTC

Ohhh Sam's reactions- so cute.

whoaluke September 9 2009, 18:50:21 UTC

Hehe. I'm glad you liked it. (o:

karaq September 9 2009, 17:18:35 UTC

Brilliant...as always. :-)

The kiss scene really made my day. Wow. It just felt SO intense. Castiel thinking Dean wanted to hit him, but instead ya know...caress him was darn well-written and it really showed that Castiel needs kind/good/loving gestures as well - and not just existing as a soldier.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

~KaraQ

whoaluke September 9 2009, 18:38:13 UTC

Hi KaraQ! I'm so glad you liked it! Hee! I'm pleased you felt the intensity, because I was certainly aiming for that. And yeah, you're probably right about Castiel needing some kind/good/loving gestures... I gather that there's not really much of that in the Angel world... Anyway, I hope to post the next chapter soon! Thanks for reading!