With My Mind, I Wake Up (The Messin' With the Enemy Remix) [Martha, Ten, the Master | R]

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Title: With My Mind, I Wake Up (The Messin' With the Enemy Remix)
Author: magicallaw
Characters/Pairings: Martha, Ten, the Master
Rating: Light R.
Summary: During the year that never was, Martha was nevery truly alone.
Word Count: 1,500
Original Story: Sleeping With the Enemy by rude_not_ginger.
Notes: Many thanks to my beta, prof_pangaea.

Comments

[persiflage_1]

Interestingly this doesn't seem quite as painful and twisted as the original...

[rude_not_ginger]

In my defense, pain was really the point of the original!

[persiflage_1]

Yes, I got that...

[rude_not_ginger]

Yeah, I'm not a big fan of fluff. I think that's one of the reasons I like this remix, too. It leaves the reader on a more hopeful note, but doesn't lose the dark edge!

[in_the_end]

That wasn't necessarily my intention as I loved the original; I wanted to show a different side, that was all. But if you liked then that's all right.

[persiflage_1]

Yes I did - sorry for not making that clearer.

[in_the_end]

That's OK, but you should probably keep in mind that your feedback is often very vague.

[persiflage_1]

You're the first person to say so.

[in_the_end]

I may well be, but like I say, you might want to keep it mind that one word comments followed by '...' is often confusing to the author.

[rude_not_ginger]

Your feedback is very vague. I felt initially insulted by your replies regarding my story. If you don't like it, that's cool, not everyone likes dark!fic. Just saying something like "The Doctor is fucked!" (followed by the "..." at the end of your two comments up there to me) doesn't really give me any idea whether you liked it, didn't like it, had a suggestion, whatever.

Just sayin'.