Flash Fiction Comment-a-Thon Round 2

Apr 13, 2013 13:37

Welcome to Round 2 of the Flash Fiction Comment-a-Thon! Each round, we are looking to get flash fiction stories (stories that take up no more than the space of an LJ comment) on a related theme across the spectrum of Doctor Who, from a multitude of authors. Below is the prompt; post a comment to claim an era and I will put you on the list. When ( Read more... )

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Flight (Tegan, Nyssa, Five) Rated G 2/2 ponygirl72 April 24 2013, 21:40:06 UTC
At first, she thought she was still coming in too fast, but the repulsors gained more power the closer she got to the ground. Half a second before she was expecting it, her feet touched grass and she was stumbling forward across somebody's courtyard, crying out as her left ankle failed to take her weight properly and sent her sprawling onto her side. The jet-wing powered off automatically upon impact, but the harness twisted tightly across her torso, sharp edges digging painfully into her back.

Before she could even start to struggle out of the straps, four hands were steadying her and tugging at the buckles holding the flight pack in place. She looked up into the Doctor's very pale, very drawn face for a moment before Nyssa's welcome voice drew her attention.

"Tegan, are you hurt?" she asked anxiously.

"Ankle," Tegan managed, wheezing a bit. "Breath knocked out of me."

"So much for a landing you can walk away from," the Doctor muttered, his sarcasm belied by his still-bloodless complexion. "Do you have the codes?"

Tegan nodded and fumbled for the belt pouch.

"Let me," Nyssa said, liberating the roll of paper. "I'll get these to the militia leader right away. And Tegan? That was... that was amazing."

Nyssa squeezed her shoulders briefly in a one-armed hug before rushing off with the precious piece of paper, leaving Tegan alone with the Doctor. She concentrated on regaining her breath for a few moments while he fussed around her, removing the jet wing and straightening her left leg so that he could inspect her injured ankle.

"You can stop looking at me like that, you know," she said eventually. "I've been flying every crazy thing I could get my hands on since I was a little kid. The first time I flew my Dad's plane, I was so small I had to sit on a book so I could see over the controls. Would you have liked it better if I'd sat around and let the Loyalist soldiers throw me in a cell with Jahred?"

The Doctor continued to stare at her like he had never seen her before for another beat. Eventually, he shook himself slightly, a hint of color returning to his cheeks.

"No, obviously not," he said calmly. "I'd have done exactly the same thing, in your position."

"Except, of course, that you would have ended up at the other end of the valley, the way you fly," she replied, smiling sweetly as the blood rose to the Doctor's face, erasing his pale look of worry as if it had never been.

"I'll have you know that I was flying before your great-great-great-grandfather was born, thank you very much," he huffed. "Now, I should get you to the TARDIS medbay and take care of that sprained ankle... unless you'd prefer to sit out the revolution?"

"Miss the revolution?" Tegan asked, allowing the sarcasm to flow freely as the Doctor eased one arm around her shoulder and the other under her knees, lifting her easily. "I might as well have stayed in bed this morning."

"Quite," he said, smug. "And where would we all be then, eh?"

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Re: Flight (Tegan, Nyssa, Five) Rated G 2/2 ponygirl72 April 24 2013, 21:42:54 UTC
So much for the hard limit of 4300 characters. Oops.

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Re: Flight (Tegan, Nyssa, Five) Rated G 2/2 eve11 April 24 2013, 22:26:53 UTC
Oh but it is absolutely lovely! :D I like the visual of Nyssa and the Doctor gaping from afar. Great character voices too! :)

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Re: Flight (Tegan, Nyssa, Five) Rated G 2/2 ponygirl72 April 25 2013, 13:47:52 UTC
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. Brevity = not my thing, apparently. :-)

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Re: Flight (Tegan, Nyssa, Five) Rated G 2/2 lost_spook April 29 2013, 08:01:47 UTC
Aw, that was brilliant! You've captured that TARDIS team very well - it's great. :-)

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Re: Flight (Tegan, Nyssa, Five) Rated G 2/2 ponygirl72 April 29 2013, 17:19:55 UTC
Glad you liked it! And, hey, can I ask you a quick question which is in no way related to the upcoming Spring Sixathon? (*ahem*) Should I assume that you have listened to both Project: Lazarus and Arrangements for War?

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Re: Flight (Tegan, Nyssa, Five) Rated G 2/2 lost_spook April 29 2013, 18:19:17 UTC
:-)

And, um, no, sorry, I am terribly behind with lots of Big Finish ranges, plus I have some gaps, and haven't heard either of those yet. (Of Six & Evelyn I have Marian Conspiracy, Spectre of Lanyon Moor, Apocalypse Element, Bloodtide, Jubilee, Pirates & Medicinal Purposes.) Obviously, this was nothing to do with anything, of course, but... I hope that isn't too awkward.

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Re: Flight (Tegan, Nyssa, Five) Rated G 2/2 ponygirl72 April 29 2013, 19:13:52 UTC
Not at all! I'm glad I asked before writing something that you probably don't want to read quite yet. ;-)

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Re: Flight (Tegan, Nyssa, Five) Rated G 2/2 a_phoenixdragon April 29 2013, 13:25:51 UTC
Ahhh, Tegan! Ever the fiesty daredevil!! And how perfect was this?!

*HUGS*

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Re: Flight (Tegan, Nyssa, Five) Rated G 2/2 ponygirl72 April 29 2013, 17:27:28 UTC
*hugs back*

Thank you! Poor Five... I don't think he knows what to do with her, sometimes. ;-)

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