[Multi-Chap] Bento - Chapter II

Oct 29, 2008 21:23

 Title: Bento
Pairings: Yabu/Hikaru (Friendship), Hikaru/Inoo, hints of Takaki/Yabu and some twist.
Characters: Yabu, Hikaru, Takaki, Inoo
Genre: Romance, Friendship
Rating: G
Disclaimer: I do not own them.
Summary: The story is about friendship between the guys and how the world in their view. But things does not go their way all the time. Just when ( Read more... )

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j3nt1sh October 29 2008, 15:59:09 UTC
APPROVED.

.....and I am the first, LOL.
as I said before, I like the foreshadowing. xD

Anyway, at the scene where Inoo and the girl were in their room I pictured them talking and laughing while standing so I edited the Inoo pushed away his chair. But it's all okay now ne~

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whitetiara October 29 2008, 16:00:24 UTC
Oh xD
Yay! I'm gonna make this public and post it at some communities ^^

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eemir_eera October 29 2008, 16:38:18 UTC
waaa...i love it lol aki..

Then he saw the girl flip her hair and hit Inoo's arm weakly. Inoo stopped chortling and stared at her.

if I saw my bf with any girl in the same condition,i'll slap my bf instead of the girl....haha....^_^

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whitetiara October 29 2008, 16:39:57 UTC
xD Thank you~~<3

Oh~ I would just stare at him and leave when he saw me xD
Because I admit that I'm 'S'. xDDD

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eemir_eera October 29 2008, 16:46:02 UTC
ha??..'S'..What is that??..haha...>.

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whitetiara October 29 2008, 17:08:14 UTC
S is sadist xD

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taupe_chan October 29 2008, 19:12:18 UTC
OH INOO YOU FLIRT D:

“I mean, this hamburger is weird. Did the chef use an expired mayonnaise? He will be so fired!”

HAHAHA LOL XDD So fussy xDD

Nice chapter, will be waiting for the next one :D

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whitetiara October 29 2008, 22:14:13 UTC
xD; Glad you like it!

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suteii October 29 2008, 19:25:33 UTC
I loved it, especially Takaki's hamburger line.... that was amusing....

Poor Hikaru though, I wouldn't know what I'd do in that situation

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whitetiara October 29 2008, 22:13:18 UTC
The hamburger is just so random xD

Thanks for reading ^^

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fafa_sama October 30 2008, 02:01:02 UTC
Nice fic! Keep writing ne? I'll wait for the next chapter. XD
takabu n hikanoo...

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whitetiara October 30 2008, 06:43:48 UTC
Yes, I will ^^
Thanks!

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