First try at Fanfiction

[whiteraven1606]

Title: Picture Puzzles Part 1/26
Rating: PG13 this part (NC-17 later parts)
Paring: House/Wilson/Chase
Disclaimer: Don't own them, as we all know.
Summary: House worried can be both good and bad.
Warnings: Mention of abuse in the past to more than one character.
A/N: Keep in mind this is my first fanfiction of any kind. 
Now beta'd by: recrudescence

Comments

[empressaurelius]

Aaw, poor Chase. Him having an eating disorder is extremely plausible, imo; I've never seen it explored in fanfic, so BRAVO for that! Eee, that line that House said, that he wouldn't choose, was ace. I can't wait for more of this.

[whiteraven1606]

Thanks. *takes small bow*

I had a friend that grew up much in Chase's postion and he couldn't eat in the lunch room. I used to pocket my carrotsticks and take them to him on the playground where he'd eat around the corner of the building from me while we talked.

Chase isn't the only one with issues. House is just a big bundle of issues. Hopefully the rest of the things I've decided on will work seem plausible as well.

[teleens_journal]

I liked this beginning and will look forward to more. BTW: Usually, the words "bad speller" & "no beta" would have sent me running for the hills, but your intro showed that you were probably just being hard on yourself - and you were! :)

[whiteraven1606]

I'm glad you liked it. Well, it's the truth, you'll see it more in my comments than in the fic itself. I spend a heck of a lot of time fixing mistakes in spelling and untangling oddly worded sentences. Thanks for reading! :)

[theprimrosepath]

Leela! ..sorry, had to pause and squee at your icon. :)

[teleens_journal]

Thanks! I like it a lot, too, which is why I must give credit where credit is due - scarlett_h did it, and there are many more great ones available on her LJ for the bargain price of a comment and credit!

BTW: Love yours as well - Leela's my favorite companion, but (sacrilege!), Davison's my favorite Doctor!

[whiteraven1606]

Thank you. I really like the three of them and putting them together is lots of fun.

Woohoo for no spelling mistakes! (I'm quite suprised actually.) I'm dsylexic and usually can't see if I've got things spelled right or not. I spent time with the spell check and a dictionary trying to make sure.

Yes, more will be up soon.

[clarkangel]

A good House/Chase/Wilson fic is hard to find. But given part one, I think I got lucky.

Well done. I think Chase having an eating disorder is very believable and you've sold me so far without even trying.

I love the voices of the characters here and House's thoughts. Wilson's too are cracking me up.

I look forward to more. LIke Now! LOL

[whiteraven1606]

I really like the trio and I think a lot of my fiction is going to be the three of them. I can't find enough so I'm writing it.

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. House and Wilson thoughts are simple it's Chase thoughts that drive me batty.

Oh, look I'm off to post the next bit. :)

More Please!!!!

[lovejsc07]

More please. Me likee! I love how everyone is just as worried about Greg, but he doesn't notice. I lkove your Greg. Again, more please!

Love To All,
Jessica

"Like I always say, there's no "I" in team...there's a "me" though, if you jumble it up."
--Dr. Gregory House

Re: More Please!!!!

[whiteraven1606]

Thanks for reading. I'm glad you liked. Don't worry there's more. And it'll be soon. I promise.