Double G

Jun 01, 2004 16:11

so, the intrest for the double g is fading away because as much as i yearn for him in the night, he does not know that i exsist. one day ill be sitting on the flor and hell come over and spanish dance on my face, and not think twice about it because he wouldnt know who i am. and plus i hear from a usually reliable source that he likes "those kind of girls" that kind that all the guys like, no matter if they are guys like you or not. so that beacuse the guys like you are interested in girls like them, there is no one left for you.

well ok new subject that was getting a bit confused. i drew this drawing of a clown a few weeks ago and i tried to write a poem based around it so here it is:

Chin sunken to his breast
He will no longer jest
Forsaken, and put at rest
He will linger

Because i did protest

Hiding beneath his bony clouds
Deep fissures between his brows
No longer to be roused

Dressed in foolish guise
Storms brewing in his eyes
He looks for something bigger

the search for his own demise

Crippled in mind
Timing with the hidden find
Rational has been stricken
Like timber
Falling abroad

With his lost eminence

only something is seriously wrong with the last 6 lines and i dont know how to fix it so if u have any suggestions please post.
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