50 Drables for Erica Set 4 31-39 (Don't Ask)

May 12, 2009 22:29

I am undertaking something. 50 drabbles which are all Erica post Seattle Grace (kinda) centric.
Each has its own title and disclaimer and sit between 50 and 350 words.
Initial disclaimer will be posted above the cut for your viewing pleasure. The rest below, the first disclaimer for each new set will be posted above the cut. In this set I do mention ( Read more... )

callie, callica, erica, brooke smith, callie torres, sara ramirez, erica hahn

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greys_1 May 13 2009, 09:22:02 UTC
Loving these little instalments, good luck with your challenge of 50, not long to go now! These are my favourites:

32#
‘...at these times she is Erica, mother, protector, confidant but when you see her without the baby in her arms, she is Doctor Hahn to the core, with a slight softness in her eyes, a softness held only for that one tiny helpless being lying it her crib.’ I loved visualising Erica as a mother, single or with someone. I believe as you wrote, that she will never lose her hard doctor front, and to see that small gentleness in her eyes was perfect.

#33 World
I loved the straightjacket metaphor, Erica is a person who would hold it all in until that irreparable moment when she snapped. Time is powerfull, constantly changing, yet remaining stable .With time tree’s grow, leaves fall and wounds heal.

#34
My face lit up with a smile as soon as I read that Erica was married. Loved the jacket pull (especially b/c it didn’t smell of calzone) and a flustered Erica is indeed how I like my women, ;)

#39 - Overwhelmed
‘Her walls where down and shattered and the little girl that had been suppressed for so long had bubbled to the surface.’ I can feel this true, Erica’s hard front finally melting to Callie to reveal a scared young girl that was hurt all over again. ‘...things where not okay, tings where not alright but things needed to be said, no matter the consequences.” Gah, so true, even if it didn’t work - they needed to talk.

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whitelder May 13 2009, 10:24:31 UTC
thank you for the comment, have you read 1-30? 34 was my backlash against the lapel pull they did in grey's... it just came to me, no thought needed...

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