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virgo_79 in whitecollarfic

Neal/Sara fic: "Chance of Rain"

May 24, 2011 06:58

virgo_79
hard PG-13 to a soft R.
Neal/Sara
General season 2 spoilers; nothing specific.
Warnings: pillow talk and a little healthy naughtiness
Neal, Sara, and a storm.

( They’re coming down from their peak as the storm reaches its own, and they shudder against each other, her weight settling down fully onto him, turning as one to watch the city sky light up through the open windows. )

Comments 13

elainasaunt May 24 2011, 11:49:18 UTC

Woah. Those fic-writing muscles look pretty toned to me. You NEED to give us more. Er, to keep in shape.

Seriously, I loved this. Just the right length (RL is keeping me from reading longer fic at the mo), and even though short it perfectly captures both characters. Also, hi, Peter cameo!

virgo_79 May 24 2011, 22:09:30 UTC

Thank you! Glad to hear I'm not too out of shape. ;)

I actually wrote this in one sitting, which almost never happens with my stuff, even when the story in question is very short.

Yes, Peter had to be in there, too.

queenaeron May 24 2011, 12:49:54 UTC

That was hot and sexy and there was not really even sex! Yeah, I'd say you haven't lost your touch!

Thanks for the nice wake-up for what has started out as a crappy morning!

virgo_79 May 24 2011, 22:10:08 UTC

Thank *you* for the feedback. Always happy to brighten a morning. :)

micheleeeex May 24 2011, 15:14:58 UTC

I love this!!

virgo_79 May 24 2011, 22:10:28 UTC

I'm glad! Thank you.

neontiger55 May 24 2011, 15:51:24 UTC

Very nice! And I'd agree, you definitely haven't lost your touch :)

virgo_79 May 24 2011, 22:10:51 UTC

Thank you very much!

ladydragoness May 24 2011, 16:22:12 UTC

Damn, that was good. It was storming hard outside last night. I didn't think of any fic ideas, probably since I was watching Bomer on Jimmy Fallon.

What do you think you could do with a New York heatwave?

virgo_79 May 24 2011, 22:14:23 UTC

Thank you. Yeah, we were having some colorful weather (I'm in NE Ohio.) Nothing too gnarly in the vicinity of my house -- we got some beautiful lightning over our backyard, but the scary stuff missed us.

The Bomer interview was hilarious; I just watched it online this afternoon. And the clip -- God, can it be June now?

Hmmm, heatwave. **Thinks thinky thoughts**