[FIC] MY PHON
pairing: henhae
rating: PG-13
Genre: Crack, Angst
Summary: Henry's a cheeky bastard.
Word Count: 1837. One-Shot
a/n: Because I feel like sometimes neither Henry nor Donghae can tweet coherent english
( “You cheeky little fucker,” Hae hisses against his jaw. “It was you who stole my phone. I looked everywhere for it. Even in Hyuk’s porno stash.” )
rating: PG-13
Genre: Crack, Angst
Summary: Henry's a cheeky bastard.
Word Count: 1837. One-Shot
a/n: Because I feel like sometimes neither Henry nor Donghae can tweet coherent english
( “You cheeky little fucker,” Hae hisses against his jaw. “It was you who stole my phone. I looked everywhere for it. Even in Hyuk’s porno stash.” )
he has a problem.
sungmin wookie y r u such sluts girls.
also oooh nice touch using the original chinese for Perfection instead of the romanization/translation!
henry y r u phat.
also i can't even take that sweet moment srsly when poor hae is so unbelievably clueless of what an idiot he is XD
i want to be like "omg they're so cute" but instead i'm like lol you're secretly being made fun of XD
"The bastard. He lied about not knowing where the phone was."
wait. you can bruise your fingernails? o_o
"Ever since our promotions started, you haven’t even spared me a single glance because you’re too busy prancing around in rainbowland with Hyukjae"
oh, ouch. way to turn the entire mood around, henry. shit just got real.
also oooh nice use of the kettle boiling in the background and an interruption by the members to illustrate a break in tension! a classic technique ;3
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concluding comments:
this was hilarious. like i giggled all the way through this. i'm so used to reading eunhae/haehyuk, it's nice to see a different dynamic. you did a really good job. seriously, i enjoyed reading this. it was cute and simple and sneakily angsty in the background at the same time. so it wasn't one dimensional, like the majority of fanfics are, because it had an underlying depth (with henry stealing hae's shit for attention and probably because he was jealous). that made it memorable.
you should write more. you have a lot of potential, i feel like you don't give yourself enough credit.
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omg and I just couldn't help but include Kyu, Wook, and Sungmin there because OTL Ryeowook and his giraffes so cute I JUST CAN'T and their general obsession with pearl milk tea and KYUHYUNNNN >:||| he's gotta keep his gaming habits in control xD
and I had got the general idea for the fic from Hae's actual tweet OTL -->http://en.korea.com/superjunior/board/110322-donghae-has-lost-his-phone-and-i-pod/
hmm, I think you can bruise your fingernails right? My brother once closed the car door a little too quickly and smashed it into my dad's thumb years ago, and D: the thumb nail was black for quite a while /o\\
eep and I have nothing against Eunhae (they are quite hot tbqh), but I was a little sad to see less of Henhae this round of promotions and HENRAYY is jealous and bitter xD although I think I may have exaggerated a bit too much. but Henry has more and more of this confident and swagger-licious vibe about him now so I could see him turn the tables around here.
but eep thankyou so much for your kind words! I'm glad that you were able to enjoy it 8D Although I probably won't be writing very much in the near future, I will try when the inspiration strikes !
thanks again for reading xDD I will try to polish my writing more :3
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you know henry way better than i do, but i don't think you exaggerated at all. it seemed totally in character to me, tbh. when it comes time to put henry in ipsuren, i will be counting on you for help :3
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meep Henry in ipsuren.....8DD I will definitely look forward to where ever he may fit into your novel! and of course I will be open to any thing I could help you with :D (although I've never seen him myself OTL)
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